Share your comic, and I'll tell you one thing I love about it! (go ahead and do it for others here, too, if you want!)

esmesn 2021-08-12 08:21:26 UTC #111

Your colors are great!! You're good at creating contrast with lots of different very vivid highlight colors. Helps the shading stand out, too. You also have excellent use of panel layout!! Makes everything flow very well.

simonitropunk 2021-08-12 17:09:52 UTC #112

Thank you so much for your insight... means a lot

whenyouweresleeping 2021-08-12 18:39:17 UTC #113

I'll take a compliment whenever I can get one

I'm always open to any criticism too

N.Kip 2021-08-12 19:10:31 UTC #114

Here is my comic!

Fox_Den7 2021-08-12 20:15:05 UTC #115

Oof okay...

esmesn 2021-08-13 05:45:08 UTC #116

this is ADORABLE T-T I was obsessed with raccoons as a kid, so I have a soft spot for this!!! :DD But yea I really like the black background, it makes everything feel comforting, I guess, I can't exactly explain it. But I like its vibe, and the vibe of the illustrations as well. Works really well with the little comics

JustABurningMemory 2021-08-13 05:47:37 UTC #117

I'd really love to hear what you like AND dislike! I hope you enjoy!

esmesn 2021-08-13 06:00:25 UTC #118

You've nailed the 80s vibe. Both in the colors, and in the backgrounds (like the blends of colors, as well as the more detailed ones) and the times you use the neon lights effects are wonderful. Really like the brush you use for the lineart, as well!! AMAZING!!

HonorableTakoyaki 2021-08-13 06:05:19 UTC #119

Sounds fun! Here:

esmesn 2021-08-13 06:20:21 UTC #120

I always look out for character design in anthro media, and I think you did super well with it!!! each design is expressive, and unique but they also work well with each other and the general fantasy-style color palette.

esmesn 2021-08-13 06:37:19 UTC #121

Oooooo yes!! Ok so I like the worldbuilding, I think it's a really cool concept for a sci-fi, and I feel like it's a world that has a lot to explore and a lot of good thematic elements. I really like Reiji's narration. Always preferred the first person narration style for this reason, so I could understand the character more, and I think that works great for him and his personality.

I'd like to see more descriptions of the setting, I feel like it'd help the atmosphere, and help the dialogue transition better!!

JustABurningMemory 2021-08-13 06:38:56 UTC #122

I'm happy to hear it! thank you for checking it out, I hope you enjoyed. I'm working on descriptions and dialogue the most currently, and a new chapter will be out by Saturday. Thanks again!

Shazic 2021-08-13 06:40:41 UTC #123

Can I post my novel even?

esmesn 2021-08-13 06:43:19 UTC #124

really like the magic system!! Love anything with magi-tech, it immediately makes a fantasy story more interesting and cool to visualize. I love the concept of magical engineers, and generally all the ways it's incorporated into the fantasy setting, and the action scenes

esmesn 2021-08-13 06:51:55 UTC #125

Your writing style does a great job capturing the horror elements, it's somber but introspective seeming, especially when you narrate the emotions and more abstract situations. And very intriguing world building, too! Seems really complex and rich, good dystopian atmosphere.

Shazic 2021-08-13 06:56:10 UTC #126

I'm really glad you think so I hope you like reading far but thank you for that it definitely motivating

WEBTOON_ADDICT_2007 2021-08-13 07:04:31 UTC #127

Hey this is a sci-fi/fantasy comic with a pinch of comedy which bring new light of thought to aliens throwing the stereotypical type of aliens over type roof. The art is not very good from ep-1-3 but from ep 4 there is a major glow up so please check it out and dont forget to rate!

iHateFridays 2021-08-13 11:29:06 UTC #128

You should do this for some of my fellow creators

@oliveoly

@CarltonIsaac

@Elfgrafix15

N.Kip 2021-08-13 19:44:10 UTC #129

Wow thank you so much! I use a brush that kinda simulates a real pencil. I thought it would fit the "old" comic vibe I wanted to go for Like the kind of lineart you get when you draw it traditionally and then scan it. Glad you're enjoying it!

esmesn 2021-08-13 20:45:03 UTC #130

Okie!!

@oliveoly
The characters are adorable and their expressions come through really well!!! really conveys their emotions/reactions, and makes the whole art style super appealing :DD

@CarltonIsaac
You're doing some great stuff with line weight and variation. Especially on people's bodies, and how the line weight is varied with the curves and angles. Helps them stand out against the backgrounds!!

@Elfgrafix15
I adore the shading and lighting, maybe because it's a bit similar to how I do it, but I always love those clean yet dramatic shadows. And also what you do with bright colors and how they contrast with the night scenes is awesome.