I really liked the story Keiva's struggles and self hatred is quite sad. However, her characterization and clever paneling kept me reading until the end.
Here's my comic which is also a short story entitled My Lost Heart
What I loved about: I liked the main character and support characters relationship. There were polar opposites but they manage to play off each other.
What I didn't like: The first few pages were difficult for me because I was able to relate to it so much and it felt like it came out left field if you just started reading this comic. Just like the short comic I made before this one I started to grow fond of the character during the last few pages of the story.