Thank you very much for the response and your kind words.
I'm working right now to rework the first chapter. Make it in color to give a better introduction into the world.
I'm gonna keep in mind the speech bubble thing and try to not obscure things that need to be shown.
When it comes to the "read from right to left thing ", of course I know that it is not exclusive to manga and is a part of asian (mainly Japaneese). It was a conscious decision to make it read this way in order to try and capture the whole essence of reading an authentic manga. Even tho my webcomic has inspirations from all over the world and not just japan I still want people who read manga to feel right at home. And to be honest people that read manga are used to this way of reading by now imo. As for people who don't read manga ... we;;, I don't really think they'd bother checking it out in the first place ( even tho I wish they would) .
Once again thanks for taking the time to take a look at this webcomic. I really appreciate the feedback and will use it to improve "narya "as it goes on . I have many things planned out for this manga including and an ending to the story. So it's not just drawing for the sake of drawing, I have a story to tell