Read about half of the first episode. I like the concept, but not the execution of the story. I got bored about three paragraphs in but I pushed to about halfway through. The flow is a bit dull, like someone telling a story they heard from someone else rather than the story unfolding before the reader's eyes. It lacks a sense of intrigue thus not allowing me to invest in it.
As advice, read more best-selling books of the genre (fantasy/sci-fi) and study the art of writing, structure and pace of these stories.