So I WOULD LIKE SOME FEEDBACK!

[heraclus]

I like drawing beautiful places and landscapes etc , i had this idea about a guy who travels a fantasy world and i came up with a plot , so i would like to here what you think , https://tapas.io/series/Traveller .

[Amecha]

English is not your native language, right?
Traveler is spelled with one L and is someone who travels to places, Traveller is a roleplaying game so I'm not sure if that's a reference or a misspelling but you also mispelled "different" and in the last panel the phrase "How I came here?" is grammatically awkward. You'd want to use the phrase "how did I come here" or "how did I get here". For just misspellings it'll be good to run the phrases through google or any other spell checker but you could probably benefit from an editor who is a native English speaker. With that said though, there is a popular webcomic that I follow that is not written by a native speaker and the small grammatical errors actually come off a bit endearing so it's not a major issue but a little spell checking will go a long way.

The art is nice though! Its pretty nice to see a comic that is, and very much looks traditional. I'd love to read more of it!

[heraclus]

Thank you for you time and comment's , yes english is not my native language , i will try to not make grammar mistakes in the future

[Rhombik]

"Traveller" is correct in British English. Maybe you're more familiar with our spelling system.

[heraclus]

Yeah i check it out on google and it was correct.

[Amecha]

Oh duh, jeeze. I normally know most British English spellings but that one slipped my mind. I had a feeling it wasn't necessarily misspelled either. Thanks for point that out.

[Rhombik]

That's quite all right, old bean.

[punkarsenic]

your landscapes definitely are beautiful - i love that! for those bits of digital, are you using ms paint? it looks like ms paint. props to you on this cover, it looks very good, especially with such a limiting program, but im not sure the comic icon looks equally good. if you are using ms paint, look at some youtube tutorials about painting in it, because some people who use ms paint are bloody genius.

also, im not sure how i feel about your lettering. it needs to be sharper, and maybe download a different font - it looks like youre using a computer default font for some parts, which puts people off. find something individual to your comic - blambot and dafont are good places to look. the 'thoughts' font is good though, just again, make the image sharper.

also, id say looking into the concept of gesture / movement would help you greatly, especially in drawing people. proko has some really helpful videos on youtube. the concept can also be transferred to landscape drawing and help create really nice compositions.

this looks really good, though! you show a lot of artistic promise, and its nice to see someone who loves drawing backgrounds.

[heraclus]

I don't use a program except Microsoft Paint Art to resize and put the lettering ,i am drawing this comic with colored pencils , using my own hands , on a A4 paper , i don't have the money for better paper or tools and i don't know how to use this progammsyou mentioned. Anyway thank you for your time and i will use your last advice about gesture /movement .

[punkarsenic]

the only program i mentioned was ms paint, which is free, and a default program. its probably like, what youre using, but under a slightly different name. i didnt tell you to use better paper or tools because your drawings themselves are very good with what youre using, but either figure out how to make sharper text in microsoft paint or find a free alternative (firealpaca, gimp, there are earlier versions of photoshop you can download for free, theyre all easy enough to pick up) where you can, because its a shame to see such potential squandered by fuzzy text.

[fruitloopchan]

I like how you did on the backgrounds! So light and easy on the eyes Keep on doing an awesome job!

[amber-rae]

Others already mentioned the spelling/ grammar errors so I will not mention them again.
I like the scenery, it's very pretty! You can almost feel the breeze!