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[mugenotasu]

thank u so much for submitting
I like your Comic especially the characters variety and interactions with each others.
I think u need more improvement when it comes to anatomy and page management (tho u did some good progress compared to the first page)
since your art is closer to manga and you are using clip studio
I advise you to watch this video it might help u:
if u like it u can check out the whole channel they got some good advises for digital and traditional manga creators

keep going mate

[mugenotasu]

Thank you so much for the amazing review u did for my web-comic and for submitting yours in here as well <3
and yeah I deleted the original prolong cause I changed some character names and some principles in the main plot in order to make the web-comic better and for better first impression .
about Doomed ones I got amazed by the way u did the prologue.and to be honest you're a genius when it comes to creativity, dialogs, story telling and where to put animations.
I cant say that the art style is bad. the lineart is fine but all u need is to work on color theory and shapes.
and I promise it'll become flawless
I can suggest u some videos for improvement

I hope u'll find that useful

[sirkbirb]

this my webcomic

Adventures of Kris | Tapas

i did the review in the comments and im gonna say it again, your art style is amazing

[ilustrariane]

your story has a lot of potential, and your art style is unique!! you could improve a little more on the color theory and constrasts, it would look awesome!!

here's mine:

RadicallyKind | Tapas

[BobbyjoeX]

oh, that channel, i personally find their videos hard to follow but thanks for trying to help (someone mentioned the paneling before and i had already looked into it for my next pages, but also i dont want too much to worry about cause i dont want this to stop being fun and i just get fed up and quit)

[storytimebiondi]

I really enjoy your art style, and your main character looks positively bad-ass. Somehow I feel like your lettering is the one thing I'd improve. The box dialogue bubbles throw me a little, and make the characters seem less personable, and more rigid. But, overall, I love the series

Anyway, here's mine!

The Stone Gods | Tapas

[Im_moron]

honestly, I thought the prologue was a mess and the color was what I had a firm grasp of in terms of direction (desaturate or darken colors for moments of dread, oversaturate singular portions to draw attention to it, but not go overboard, Yellows and warms are the opposite of Purples and cold colors, harsh high contrast colors to intensify it) I probably didn't know this when I first made the prologue a year or two ago.

but sure, I'd love to work up my color theory even more! thanks for sending the videos!

[mugenotasu]

thank u so much for submitting and reviewing my comic
and yeah dont worry about the MC,all will get in time.
about the rainy days, I like the idea, the vibe and the events rolling. but I think maybe u should think about adding some values to make it more alive. the art style is fine but the pixelated lines are pretty disturbing .
I suggest using a pencil brush or softer one for lineart if possible .
Otherwise it's an amazing Comic

[mugenotasu]

thank u so much for submitting your comic, for the review and mostly for the follow <3
Your web-comic is pretty cool when it comes to refreshing colors and amazing character design (really love that). But sometimes the blur overuse appears a bit disturbing.
cant wait to see what fate has for the dragon hybrid

[mugenotasu]

thank u so much for submitting ur web-comic in here and reviewing mine mate <3
and Duuude !! really love ur comic. A classic comedy one, that really is my weakness
u just gained a new follower

[mugenotasu]

thank u for reviewing my work and submitting urs <3
I'll work more on color theory I promise
and Oh boy ur comic is so Hardcore. love the art-style the events and the composition.Just flawless.
insta follow XD
u desirve more than70 follow dude

[mugenotasu]

So true
having fun and enjoying work is the most important thing

[mugenotasu]

thank u so much for the review and for submitting ur comic in here <3
ur unique style just finishes me off (the colors the plot the characters ... everything is just perfect)
I found out that i was already subscribed when I wanted to XD

[storytimebiondi]

No problems there! Thank you for all your kind words

[Chita]

Aww, you don’t need to thank me for that! Also thank you so much for the review, the sub and all the likes, it really means the world to me and I hope that you like it!!

[RaptagonStudios]

We are getting to the end of the start of our comic, so we are excited for what happens next. Let me know what you think!

Novaborn: Tale of Inpherna | Tapas

[mugenotasu]

thank u for submitting here
what I like about it mostly is the coloring and the fact that it's oriental (just like mine XD)
the world u made is pretty lovely and the clothing is fascinating.
but I guess u should work on ur anatomy (that's the case for most of us I think) and also the composition (some scenes seem so flat like the last panel on the 12th page)
otherwise it's cool

[catluckey]

Here's mine! This is a great format also for me to check out other creator's comics!
I use Paint Tool SAI and Photoshop for dialog and a few special effects. I had a lot to learn being this is my first manga/comic. Art gets better, as this comic started in 2014.

The Watchman | Tapas

[catluckey]

Your two episodes took me through this one man's heartwrenching journey. Though dark, your images are lovely, creative, and demands attention. I loved the alien-like landscape, ancient world building, flowing robes, and burning desires. You played these very well and makes me hope that you will continue to post updates of your comic. I'm going to sub. But also I hope you will find my story to your taste...maybe to the point of subbing. If not, do not worry. I have gotten a great return from you. Success to you, @mugenotasu

[JediM]

I just took a look. Usually I don't end up subbing to things that I feel are like-baiting but this was really interesting. It really does feel Souls-like. It felt quiet and somber. Very Dark Souls 2. My only advice is that you don't need a lot of the dialogue in the second episode. In my opinion. It would have been more impactful with silence during the fight with the giant, resurrection, and his killing of the girl. The woman speaking in the second episode and the pact in the first episode are the only words you need.

Feel free to review and comment on mine.

The Hungry Lions :: They Devoured The Ashes - Part 1 | Tapas