thank u so much for the review and for submitting ur comic in here <3
ur unique style just finishes me off (the colors the plot the characters ... everything is just perfect)
I found out that i was already subscribed when I wanted to XD
Aww, you don’t need to thank me for that! Also thank you so much for the review, the sub and all the likes, it really means the world to me and I hope that you like it!!
We are getting to the end of the start of our comic, so we are excited for what happens next. Let me know what you think!
thank u for submitting here
what I like about it mostly is the coloring and the fact that it's oriental (just like mine XD)
the world u made is pretty lovely and the clothing is fascinating.
but I guess u should work on ur anatomy (that's the case for most of us I think) and also the composition (some scenes seem so flat like the last panel on the 12th page)
otherwise it's cool 
Here's mine! This is a great format also for me to check out other creator's comics!
I use Paint Tool SAI and Photoshop for dialog and a few special effects. I had a lot to learn being this is my first manga/comic. Art gets better, as this comic started in 2014.
Your two episodes took me through this one man's heartwrenching journey. Though dark, your images are lovely, creative, and demands attention. I loved the alien-like landscape, ancient world building, flowing robes, and burning desires. You played these very well and makes me hope that you will continue to post updates of your comic. I'm going to sub. But also I hope you will find my story to your taste...maybe to the point of subbing. If not, do not worry. I have gotten a great return from you. Success to you, @mugenotasu
I just took a look. Usually I don't end up subbing to things that I feel are like-baiting but this was really interesting. It really does feel Souls-like. It felt quiet and somber. Very Dark Souls 2. My only advice is that you don't need a lot of the dialogue in the second episode. In my opinion. It would have been more impactful with silence during the fight with the giant, resurrection, and his killing of the girl. The woman speaking in the second episode and the pact in the first episode are the only words you need.
Feel free to review and comment on mine.
Here is my review, I already commented on the text, but that is easily fixable and doesn't detract from the rest of the comic. I like the sketch like lines, it sits well with the kind of story and coloring you use. Speaking of coloring, love the style of shadow and light you use, gives us that dready and doom feeling that the world clearly is.
Using different fonts is nice for the whole 'coward' part, makes the words hit home!
Here is mine for review, I really need to update the banner O_O Looks ugly and I update on monday now lol
It's very beautiful and has a pretty good story so far. As long you keep updating you're sure to get a large following. No doubt in my mind!
Thank u so much for submitting, viewing and for especially for the sub. it really means a lot to me 
about ur comic it's pretty cool <3
I love the compositions and character design u put in there. One thing I noticed. The hair looks like if it's glued on the head of some characters like nelly on the 11th page of the 6th chapter. Otherwise it's an amazing piece of work.
thank u for submitting and for reviewing my comic <3
I quiet got ur point about dialogs
about The Hunger Lions I think I appreciate the story so far. the composition is Okey but I guess u should work more on ur lineart and anatomy if u wanna make it flawless .
Hi mugenotasu! here's my webcomic! hope we can exchange opinions!
I really like your art style! I think it's beautiful and adds to the overall tone of the comic!
And that last panel of chapter two, whoa! It caught me off guard and left me wanting more!
Well here's my shot at a review:
To start off the art style is gorgeous. The lack of vibrant colors except for the sparse, critical where they are used gives the feeling of a dull, dreary world that is all that remains of a more lively one in another time while also having a certain beauty to it.
In terms of the story I usually wait on giving my full opinion until I have a bigger chunk of the comic to work with but I can attempt to give my thoughts on what I can take to be a pretty self contained intro. I'm not in to nor very familiar with the Souls series (As you describe the comic being Souls-like) so being new to this I did find the story a bit difficult to follow. It felt like I was going in having skipped a first or second chapter though by context I could piece together what the status of the main character, his goal, the world and the awaiting woman and child represent.
I've added this one to my library so I'll be ready when more comes along!
For now I present the comic I've been working on for a bit. I'm only the writer, working with another artist (Now 2 as of last year. You'll notice the art style shift)
thank u so much for reviewing my web-comic and for submitting urs
About Big Rumble Academy, I see that it's an amazing comic when it comes to the plot and variety of characters. the choice of colors is a good but I think u should consider saturation for the colors to look more appealing. Also I thing u should work more on the anatomy. Otherwise it's pretty good .
thank u for submitting ur web-comic and for reviewing mine as well
I guess urs are okey. I like the fact that every one has it own set of colors and I respect traditional artists especially the ones who work with coloring pencils (these are the hardest tools). But I guess u should work on some comic fundamentals like anatomy, composition and perspective.
Just keep it up mate
Thank you sooo much, @mugenotasu! You know what that means about glued hair....practice, practice, and practice more for great, easy flowing lines. And that's what I continue to do. Keep hanging in there and thankies again!!!
thank u so much for submitting your comic and for reviewing mine <3
really love the humoristic way u present the plot. the artstyle fits the comic perfectly. If only u could work more on the anatomy and dynamic poses, that will definitely make it flawless.
The visuals are amazing for real and I love the mystery involved. Wonderful work. Wish there were more chapters : ). It reminds me of a more fantasy and ancient type of story (which is what I'm sure you were going for) and definitely has that classic vibe that can remind people of stories such as Final Fantasy. Definitely captivating.
Thanks! Really appreciate your input I am trying on the color scheme, expecially for backgrounds so they don't mend well, still learning xP. Anatomy has always been tricky, expecially when they are moving and specially hands.
Appreciate your review Glad you like the plot and characters
I gave it a read (I am not the thread creator thought). I read the first two chapters. I would suggest working with transitions between scenes. It jumps from place to place and leaves one kind of lost where events are happening. Transition may be as simple as showing a building which gives reference they move there.
Also space out events have some in between dialogue or even foreshadowing. As an example in the 'dream' maybe 2 to 3 panels more to show the scary element and her been 'outcast' in say her classroom. Then in the classroom have some 'murmurs' effect that suddenly go quiet when the 'enemy girl' enters the room to signal something is about to happen.
You have a very soft semi chibi style which is nice, maybe adding a bit of grayscale to give it a bit of depth would help. Keep up the work 
Thank you so much! Yeah I am working on those fudmentails! It's hard! I can't wait til I get past that wall.
thank u so much for submitting that amazing comic of urs and reviewing mine .
as I said before, ur comic is amazing. the scenes are lovely including the line art, the colors and the composition, especially on the latest episodes. the dialogs are cool and the characters design and abilities is cooler. Really looking forward to see more of that
thank u for submitting ur comic in here and reviewing mine .
well I pretty much like the ideas in ur story (the various dimensions, worlds and creatures)
if only u can work more on the anatomy and dynamic poses, that would be amazing. otherwise it's readable and that's cool
I loved your red lights like a sunset. The story seems very good and your drawing style is amazing.
This is my comic, Anima:
Thank u for submitting your web-comic in here
and wow that is one hell of an amazing comic. the panels flow smoothly and the art style is just so lovely.
Just flawless
I have nothing else to add but to follow that gorgeous work
thank u for submitting ur comic in here
the plot is simple to understand and I like that <3
if there is sth I can criticize itt will be the artstyle, it needs more work (anatomy and composition)
but dont worry there's already some good progress compared to the first episode.
keep up
thank u for submitting ur comic and reviewing mine <3
ur comic is pretty interesting (the plot is unique and the art is okey). I guess if u want to make it even better u should work a little bit on ur lineart (it's a little shaky and that's a little disturbing)
Otherwise it's amazing keep up
Your art style is really nice. Almost like a painting in some panels, though I think it would benefit from being a little sharper with less blurring
. My biggest gripe is that the font is very stark and plain (this might be what you're after, if so, stick to it!). It might attract the reader to have a more interesting font. There are plenty of traditional word balloon fonts that you can use for free on the internet. Blambot is a good resource for those.
I've only recently joined Tapas. I uploaded my first issue of my comic the other day. You can find it here:
Keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot! I started working with digital drawing a little while ago, I'm still not completely used to it, I hope the lines soon get less shaky.
