Sunday reading, reading your first chapters (CLOSED)

ivanskilling 2021-03-28 02:24:39 UTC #42

Thank you, I"m glad you like the chat server snippets! I hope you'll enjoy the next few episodes too.

thecrystalrook 2021-03-28 14:05:50 UTC #43

Just to clarify, it's not a fanfic. The RPG its derived from is one that I created when I was 13 Thank you for reading!

theperapen 2021-03-28 16:27:26 UTC #44

Thank you for your detailed feedback bulletcrucifixion, I really appreciated! I'm a bit swamped with work, but I will deffo check out your stories as soon as I have the chance
Stay safe! <3

bulletcrucifixion 2021-04-01 20:42:40 UTC #45

This sunday ; @petto_lizz , @Desserts_24 , @HippieGhost and @Freemints30

bulletcrucifixion 2021-04-04 17:15:42 UTC #46

@petto_lizz Story looks very cute and chill. Sounds like a nice story about a rebuilt family. I'm tiring to get more into that kind of couple dynamic so nice to see other inspiration from people I can get!

bulletcrucifixion 2021-04-04 17:22:15 UTC #47

@Desserts_24 Read first chapter of the revenge plot, this is starting very strong. You managed to create strong feelings for characters with only one chapter, I already hate the dad so much and I hope Clara/Cha get justice. This actually reminds me the tv show, Revenge.

petto_lizz 2021-04-04 19:00:34 UTC #48

Oh that's a sweet feedback, I am glad to hear that and happy to see that you are into this kind of stories <3

bulletcrucifixion 2021-04-04 19:01:08 UTC #49

@HippieGhost Good first chapter ! Dialogues between the siblings are very well written !

HippieGhost 2021-04-04 19:03:29 UTC #50

thank you kindly! I'm glad you liked it

bulletcrucifixion 2021-04-04 20:29:07 UTC #51

@Freemints30 Black heroine ?! Yooooooooo love this !

Freemints30 2021-04-04 20:43:59 UTC #52

Haha, Im glad you do. I hope you can enjoy more of the story., along the way as well. She's more the equivalant black-mix, mixed in-general. Like my mom, native/black/white (curly-wavy hair fairish skin). Really its supposed take place in a world where skin colour matter very little and mostly everyone is mixed in some way.

(yes that's me being self indulgant cus that's just me and my family and Im not sorry about it )

Hope you can enjoy. I also have male protage in it whose with vilatigo. So keep an eye when he shows up.

KUUPID 2021-04-04 21:56:48 UTC #53

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it! And she will definitely get her revenge!