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[ybarrolaemmanuel]

Hi, @delladz I was gripped by the style in grays and the sci-fi/action. I subscribe to see more and I like your stuff on instagram.

Here's my comic, it's also a sci-fi/action check it out.

Lupita - ルピタ | Tapas

[silenthisper]

Would you like for me to do a review on yours?

[silenthisper]

Just did, so.. here it goes.

From what I read so far, in a way. I can almost hear the protagonist's slight despreation and confusion.. as if it's almost real in a sense, and that's a good thing. Mostly because this can lead the readers to be able to relate with the protagonsit. You definitely got a good and interesting plot going, since right now... I already have one question, but you already said that on the synopsis it's not going to be answerable so... welp.

Second, if you could add more detail into how the protagonist look, the overall environment and such, it would defineitly improve this into a even better work then current one. Mostly because this could help the readers to further visualize the world and be even more imersed into it. Aside from that, keep it up

[silenthisper]

Review time, so off we go.

First, I would have to say, it really does convey a lot of emotion even within just this short comic. You've definitely given me a lot of questions that I would love to have answers.... that's for sure. Things like, why did the antagonist want to betray their friends for power? What's their motive? (I am always a fan of complicated backstories, villain or not). Another thing, I would really like to know the progress of the events that happened within the time skip, things like how did the protagonist react after the antagonist betray them, what would happen to his other friends? So many questions.... and honestly, the fact how the protagonist went from wanting to help the antagonist to be back on the 'right' track, to leaving him to make the decision, definitely shows the maturity of the protagonist, and how it ends in a way really hits hard.

Second, love your art style, it seems lovely and the action, emotion definitely conveyed through this, that's for sure. If you have any future works, definitely looking forward to it

[silenthisper]

SO review time, Star Seeders mostly because that really caught my interest...

I will be honest, I like how you convey your character's thoughts and such when it comes to their perspective or viewing the environment. And believe me, I do have some questions about how atomic beings were created in the first place. You know, about cycle 10 and such, how were they first created, how did they come to the conclusion of cycle 10 of all numbers? That aside, this is good work honestly, I can visualize how the protagonist looks, even how the other race looks, which is definitely a plus here.

With that in mind, keep it up!

[silenthisper]

For Dan, from what I read so far. I can understand why he would turn into that, and in a way, I do feel bad for him. I completely understand how years of being rejected, that hatred can be overwhelming individausl. However, in Dan's case, he turns it into a sort of motivation in a way... and that itself could be a good thing if it's used correctly, otherwise. It's honestly playing fire with fire and it could risk ending up hurting himself if anything. Another thing, I am living for how moral ambiguity on dan is, and I always love characters that are in the moral grey zone, it makes them even more interesting.

Also, there are certain comical references or even funny moments, so this is a joy to read. One example did be how, "Where the hell did she go meathead" Just... that seriously got a laugh out of me .

Aside from that, Keep up the good work!

[silenthisper]

Here we go, just by one chapter. You honestly conveyed a lot of emotion and that's not an easy thing to do, especially in a short story. Plus, I am starting to feel bad for the characters already, and that last line... honestly hits hard, and in a way, it implied plenty of things which makes me want to read it even more.

"Once upon a time there were 4 boys, who loved each other too much but not enough"

This one-liner has honestly plenty of deep meanings in it, and it does show more of a complex side instead of all the romantic side which is often portrayed in stories. So that's definitely a nice change of pace for starters, and I literally just binge read the entire thing, so... good work, definitely looking forward to more of it in the future

(Side note, would you like to check out mine? There's now 2 episode, and the second one being part 1 of the Origins of Silent Whispers)

[silenthisper]

Okay, heads up. I am going to comment for 50 and Above.

From what I read so far, it's honestly quite intriguing. Some of them, I can picture how the scene is like even though I have no idea how the characters look like, sort of a shame but it's alright. Like for episode 1, it got a laugh out of me at least,

"The War isn't Over! Let's have a fair fight; General vs General!"
Man, little did Max know he is making a huge mistake :laughing. It's a war, what else do you expect from a war? Can't exactly win a war with a one-man squad, that's downright suicide lmao. So gotta agree with Ryder, better luck next time-

That aside, I do have a fun time reading it, keep up the good work

[silenthisper]

Honestly, I love how they just ever so casually fall into medieval times, and it is pretty interesting so far. And with how one of them just ask if they can bring them back.. and the unknown said no. It's kind of funny in a way, I mean... Ah, the good old dimensional travelling problems, just one of the many issues of being a dimensional traveller.

Somehow, I can almost hear their voice speaking through the comic in here. If it's not a given, Yes, I am a huge history fan, medieval times being one of them. I honestly like the character design and when they mention the medicine... It brings a question, what medicine do they need to take and for what purpose? I want to know the answer.

So from what I see so far, good work.

[ybarrolaemmanuel]

Would you like for me to do a review on yours?

Of course, but only one condition. Please reviews of bad things or everything you can see from your point of view about not working things or not clear. Please don't be afraid to hurt me or use real words.
thank you for taking the time to give us feedback.

[silenthisper]

Sure, I can do that. But do you mind if you check out mine and see how you think?

[sevenstarsofeightIam]

As to the science of Atomic Progression, I drop hints throughout the chapters, and may further develop the idea in the sequel. I will try to give a good answer to any question you ask. Thanks. I appreciate your review.

[silenthisper]

Not a problem, I enjoy reading your work anyway. If you don't mind, could you check out mine and see if you are interested?

[karamesser]

The answer about the medicine was answered quite a few issues later, but Karl is bipolar, and so they're talking about his lithium pills he takes for that.

I really should have answered that question much sooner in the comic, though. Dang, it took quite a few issues before it was brought up properly.

Anyways, thank you for the kind words.

[silenthisper]

Not a problem. It was a fun read

[silenthisper]

This thread would be closing, since I have a new Promotional Thread!

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Hey everyone, Almost one month from now, I had published my collection: Silent Whispers. Once again, I am glad to announce that I have reached 50 subscribers and counting (It's actually past that now but... :sweat_smile:)! And what's even more, I saw that I am on #3 in the popularity section for free to read! Thank you for the support and encouragement, it really goes a long way on my end, especially when it comes to overcoming writer's block in general. That aside, the second episode, Origins…

[Skyscion]

Thanks a lot!
(Tbh I haven't opened Tapas in a while and almost forget to check the forum, haha. Luckily, I just remembered; it's really nice to hear encouragements!)

And as for Max, all I can say is I hope he forgives his writer for giving him such an end...

Well, hope you read more of the short stories when you have the time!
I'd be very glad to hear your reviews and comments!

[silenthisper]

Not a problem, and no worries. It was a joy to read, so it was my pleasure

[Nakasuka]

Congratulations!!!

This is my novel. Please do not ask for a sub trade, because I am not interested in it. I only want genuine subs from readers who genuinely enjoys reading my stories in some way. That being said, please check out my novel and tell me what you think!!

Genre: Thriller, Supernatural, Comedy, Fantasy

One opportunity could lead to new adventures. The sole question is; What type of adventure will it be? And how will it end?

Hemmingston | Tapas

HAPPY READING!!!!!!

[silenthisper]

For sure, I would more then happy to do that. In exchange, would you like to check out mine as well?