This thread's getting pretty long! Which makes me happy. I'm sorry if it takes me a couple posts to get everyone looked at. And the semi-esoteric order I pick them up.
@feuersichel I subscribed! I admit I can be a bit fussy with traditional media artstyles, but I enjoyed the quips and the humor between the two characters too much to not keep at it. Nicely done!
@IndigoShirtProd I really like the character designs of this one a lot! The art in general has a lot of line confidence that I like. The reason I ended up not subscribing is mostly personal taste; I can tell that there's a pretty ambitious setup, but I think the actual character introduction is a little slow. I think a more concise intro blurb would fix that up very well; keep at it, and I'm sure you're going to get subs.
@Larslaustsen I'm sorry to be a broken record; it's the technical details like spelling and grammar that really hold me back from subscribing. I can tell that you're a very creative person, even just by the fact that you brought up this wonderful thread. It takes a lot of courage to actively seek criticism. Practice hard--I really want to see you keep going.
@tchotchkeco This is another one that I bite my lip at not subscribing too, because it really comes down to personal preference rather than any technical details I can put my finger on. I like the character designs a lot, and the art and perspective is really ambitious. But I'm really not familiar enough with cyberpunk to get the nuances of a lot of it's jokes and setups. This is another one I really want to see keeping going though--I'll definitely try to check back in.
@Allyx God, I feel like a fussy brat for going "it's not you my dude, it's my personal taste" on so many of these. Your chapter had a strong ending, and I can tell you've got a good story to tell. I think the thing that threw me off was that the chapter was a little long for an intro (I know, it's super hard since you really want to introduce everyone to a lot). I think if it was broken in half or so, I'd be into it a lot more. However, since this is a new story, I'll be keeping my eye on it on fresh to check back in. I might very well change my mind on a sub.
I'll be back for the rest of yuns. Also, feel free to take revenge by punching my story in the face.