Tell us about your newest page! Comment on the one above first!

[efdvorsky]

I like the compositions of the paneling. It's classic superhero but also modern, A+ mix :Ub

I can finally upload this page of Cosmic Fish eyyyyyy

[Alexandritea]

I really love the color scheme you're using. the shading is fantastic and i love the animation in the middle panel. The facial expressions really matches the mood you're setting.The poses that you draw also really helps set the emotion of the character even further. Over all, fantastic job c: !

in this update of In the Name of the Creator it's mostly meant to show one,built up, event in one whole page.

[agentfink]

@YuliaCandylun Hey there! In this thread, you're supposed to comment on the person above you! Just a reminder for next time You skipped over @Kaos_Comics page! (I hope I am not becoming the thread police!)

@Kaos_Comics... Fun page!
Because this is a pinup (not a comic page) I'll write my impressions in regards to the characters. I really like the colors of the sun and expressions of the people. It's amazing that this is from 2009, I can see where the characters are still the same but you changed their designed to be more efficient for web comics. That evolution is great to see!

@Alexandritea beautiful colors on this page! That graphic symbol is really eye catching. I dig the greens and the effects going on here! I checked out a few pages back and like the overall tone of your comic. Consistent colors and execution in art. But I will say that your lettering needs a bit of work. It's a great font, very easy to read, but my issue is how it fits in your bubbles. Sometimes the bubbles are too tight around the words (p8)... sometimes the words don't fit the bubble nicely (p11) if there were something to keep in mind and improve-- it would be there. Overall good job!

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The Pale 1.27

[quietsnooze]

@agentfink Ahh I'm such a fan of your work!! The clean lines and the beautiful balance of your panels really shines through on this page specifically. There's such a great flow to the word bubbles, too. Overall great quality work as I've come to expect from you

Latest page of Radio Silence:

[FaithWalkers]

@quietsnooze: This style reminds me of the 90s comics for some reason! The color scheme is really eye appealing! Good job!

Latest page of Crystal Casualty:

[YuliaCandylun]

yeah 2009 wasn't a good one. probably my mind blocking everything automatically when I see it lol

but page is funny! nice! everything simple and with humor. hope u grow well since then as well!)

[YuliaCandylun]

yeah, think u can do it same good as comics .I'm about thread police...

[mariusthered]

@FaithWalkers cool page the dark color dose a good job at making all the speak bubbles stand out and the expressions and movment are well done.

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Super hero time in Talesfromswipecity

[GFalconDX]

I really love the use of perspective in your backgrounds. However, I noticed that the character in some of the panels look a little stiff, especially the 1st panel. You can remedy this by drawing more dynamic poses when you're practicing. It really helps a lot!

Here's the latest page from my comic, The Chronicles of SolLuna.

[FaithWalkers]

Thank you so much! ;w;

[donathinfrye]

@GFalconDX

I love the paneling of this page! The first panel is framed fantastically, its perspective is awesome, and the movement of perspective between the rest of the panels is super effective. That's a fun page. Plus, I really dig the design of that scope! Really nice details on it.

My newest page of Atonement finally wraps up my big gamble with a long, silent prologue! I love how it turned out, but I won't lie ... I'm super excited to move onto more traditional conversations and scenes to kick the story forward with its upcoming pages. : )

[TheVoidchildProject]

@donathinfrye Second time I'm commening on your stuff. It's stellar as usual. And now that this prologue is complete I have to say it's really piqued my interest.The layout of the panels deserve an extra mention just becuse it makes the page feels so vibrant and alive. And the setting feels very unique so far. The fact that the fight between the "prehistorc" people throughout the prologe turns out to be some sort of game was actually very unexpected. Like the rest of your stuff I've read so far, every page packs a punch!

Thankfully I'm already subbed to Atonement and I'm excited to see what it's really about. =)

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In today's Voidchild I try my hand at drawing some effects that I've not tried before and our protagonist remains unable to intervene.

[kanisgir]

It looks interesting I'm not completely sure whats going on but I might take the time to go back to the beginning just so I can see what happens and follow along with the story

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Todays nekoboys had more time and effort put in because of the wings but it was worth it in my opinion

[60Six]

These characters are adorable! I don't know anything about them personally, but I love the guy in the first panel! I'm a sucker for characters with big fluffy ears. I have to say, I'm pretty glad for having "ripped off" an angel's wings, I'm really glad it's not graphic. |D It has its time and place, but I can get a little tired of gross out shock humor, so I'm personally kind of glad there isn't a ton of blood and bone attached to those wings... Some nice innocent humor like this is pretty nice.

And now for something much less innocent: Vicious dogs in the latest page of City of Blank:

[cbrubaker]

You have a great coloring style! Nice contrast, and the use of blur effect in the middle panel is a good artistic choice! Very cinematic.

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Latest KOKO on Tapastic: Koko finishes putting up her tent.

[GAIJINcomics]

So funny ending! and the art style compliments the humor well
Also love the moon btw!

Here is my manga Death ward --> https://tapastic.com/episode/280691

Fairly new manga with 50+ pages in thus far and story finally arriving to its first big action part!

(newest page)

[donathinfrye]

@GAIJINcomics

The art is crisp and clean, and the panels are framed very well! I like how expressive the final panel is with the shadows over the villain's face! I do think that the page would benefit from editing; proper punctuation, capitalization, and some cleaning up of the grammar would help me a lot. Having someone strong in English to help you edit the dialogue is something that I would happily suggest to you. The art is high quality and polished -- your text deserves the same treatment! : )

Here's the new page from I, NECROMANCER set to go live later today!

[agentfink]

@donathinfrye Ooooh! A different comic from you! I remember you posting about this in another thread.
So far, I really like the atmosphere-- the colors are great and magical, nice hint to the world. The art matches the overall tone of creepiness-- what's in the BOX?!?! Good job to your team!

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The Pale 1.28

[dglisson]

I love this page, it's very exemplary of the easy sense of comraderie among your cast. The faces are so wonderfully expressive. I am a big fan of your art!

Below is the latest cover for Beast Bait, Issue 3. As with all my covers, the inks are mine and the colors are Roberto Diaz:

[TheVoidchildProject]

@dglisson I really like the vibrancy of thsi cover and your characters are very well defined and have a unique look of their own. Sorry, I don't know the names of the characters but I'm unsure what pose the male one is going for. I think he's meant to lean onto the hood of the bus. Actually, scratch what I just said. Upon closer inspection see now that he's holding on for dear life because the bus is suspended high above the ground. That's a neat idea for a cove that should piquether eaders interest. The coloring deserves an extra note as well. Well done!

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In today's Voidchild Abraham finally wakes up, among other things.