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[TheVoidchildProject]

@Kaos_Comics Your art is always very clean and crisp. It reminds me a lot of "Garfield"-type comic styles. The fact that it is so crisp makes it very easy to get pulled into one of the pages. As for the humor, well it seems appropriately juvenile and what I'd expect from a comic with the name "Juvies".

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In yesterdays Voidchild (I couldn't upload either), someone finally mentions the name of the comic!

[donathinfrye]

@TheVoidchildProject

You just keep getting better and better with every update. The shading is great here, and you've really made the lack of much color a stronger and stronger aesthetic as the comic continues. The paneling is very effect here, and you've used a nice variety of perspectives, which gives the sense of movement. Since there's not much literal movement in this page, it works to evoke the emotional stirrings rather nicely, if that was your intent. Your lettering is also getting stronger. The last bubble in panel three gets a little messy at the bottom when the text breaks away from its diamond shape, but that's a super minor thing. I really enjoy seeing you continually push yourself ... and it helps that you're building a very compelling story with a very compelling protagonist. Great work.

This week, instead of sharing Atonement, I'd like to share what was a rather tricky page from I, Necromancer! So that's what I've done above. : )

[GFalconDX]

Really like the dark mood of the comic. It really sets the tone for your story.

Here's the latest page from my comic.

[TheVoidchildProject]

@GFalconDX I really like your coloring/shading and making use of the panel layout (the over/under style) makes the page more dynamic yet stil symmetric. Big compliments on your hands. I hate drawing hands! But you've made it look easy. Not sure what's going on in the page exactly. It looks like she's about to drop something onto a street from high above, but I'm not sure. Either way, well done. =)

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In today's Voidchild, Mary gets an offer she can't refuse or I guess has to think about or something.

[Kaos_Comics]

@TheVoidchildProject Hmmm Never trust a "Suit" who can't tuck his shirt in... I like the selective colouring in your comics. I think i've said it before. It has this Sin City vibe to it.

Another Juvies for today

[myimaginarypals]

@Kaos_Comics great stuff. I like the overall flow and the color scheme, definitely fitting

My latest at https://tapastic.com/series/My-Imaginary-Pals is a tribute to those who have fallen. Happy Memorial Day

[jessicasurline]

@myimaginarypals Tastefully done in a respectful tone.

Here's the latest from Whetstone:

[TheVoidchildProject]

@jessicasurline As usual, your pages convey alot of emotion and atmosphere. There's something in every panel for me to enjoy. The detailed devatstation and dread of the top panel (arousing my curiosity). How you cut off the panel just below eye-height on in the second (the panel makes me want to take a deep breath and breathe out). The resignation of panel 3 and the ice cold demeanor (or mentoring of sorts?) in the final panel. When every panel feels like it packs a punch like this I can't help but liking it. The only thing I'll add is that for my own personal taste, I find the coloring a bit grainy. There's nothing wrong with the colors themselves (in fact I really like the strong contrast), I just prefer alternative coloring styles.

Incidentally, this page makes me want to play Overwatch for some reason......

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In today's Voidchild, we finally start to creep out of that dank old cave system.

[Symphorians]

This is a great thread. So much great stuff here that I probably wouldn't have found otherwise. Voidchild (above) is an example. Looking back through the pages, I think the creator has really hit the tone perfectly with parts 3 and 4. The spare use of colors for the eyes and other small elements works very well to draw attention without detracting from the overall feel of being in supernatural Victorian England. I really enjoyed this comic. Very nice indeed!

In contrast to Voidchild's darkness (which I love), the most recent page of Symphorians is a bright, sunny fall morning at Buffalo Coast University, where our intrepid Professor Holmes is noticeably absent from his teaching duties. Cheers all!

[mariusthered]

@Symphorians lovely artwork, I found the teacher character interesting, I have a principal that looks a little like her they both have that( strict and don't mess look)

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and the new page of Talesfromswipecity

[HOME]

@aronthemason Cool. Good job. Goood goood job! No, really, it's very original.

And some panels from the latest page of my sci-fi comic HOME:

[donathinfrye]

@HOME

I'm already a subscriber. Your illustration is extremely polished and vibrant. Your vertical scroll technique is extremely good -- coming from someone who doesn't tend to like vertical scroll. Your use of animation is extremely effective. Your story is super immersive.

In short, you have the start of one hell of a comic on your hands, and it's very evident to me how much preparation and time you've put into this project. You're doing something different and ambitious, and I like seeing that. Very excited to see your work continue.

And here's the newest page from my own little space opera mystery -- ATONEMENT. This is the first page that I did the lettering for -- I'll be doing the lettering from here on out.

[Greg_Dickson]

@ donathinfrye

Wow, your art is insanely detailed! I actually had to squint to determine whether your first panel was painted, or was 3D-rendered. Details like the sheen on the woman's dress really sold it. Also, I really like your usage of the black and white text bubbles to differentiate between who is speaking. It immediately makes it incredibly easy on the eyes to read (also, the red text at the end was a nice touch to give those words some added importance.

Here's the newest and final prologue page [Prologue (3)] from my comic, Don't Be A Hero (you may need to click on the link to get a better idea of what it's like by seeing the full-sized image, as the text is really small on the forum picture):
https://tapastic.com/series/Dont-Be-A-Hero

[myimaginarypals]

@Greg_Dickson great inking, I really enjoyed your strip and am subscribing

Please subscribe to...
https://tapastic.com/episode/36627

[mariusthered]

I know the feeling well lol

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today I big secret came to light in my comic so i posted a double page! he's the first

to see the next page ( or sub) it's here Talesfromswipecity

[TheVoidchildProject]

@aronthemason Your art is crips and clean and the characters are distinct from one another. I'm not sure, but it looks like you're using 3D-model backgrounds for your work. For me personally this creates a sort of dissonance when looking at the panels. I noticed a few errors in the lettering too. I like the flow of the story, from reading these panels. It seems like a nicely paced comic. Good work!

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Newest page of Voidchild in which I'm back to drawing cityscapes and such and I don't really remember how to....

[Kaos_Comics]

@TheVoidchildProject good job as always!

This weeks Juvies

[Merle]

The page above me is quite unique in it´s humor. Either I missed something or it is not my type of humor...
but the art is pretty good.

Here´s the newest page of my Thriller/coming of age Patterns in Snow:
https://tapastic.com/episode/369609

[TheVoidchildProject]

@pearl1 I'm not a big fan of "see-through speech bubbles". It kind of throws me off as I try to look through them. You're good with perspectives. Interior car scenes are always difficult. Or at least I feel so, but I didn't get stopped up by this reading your page. The pacing and dialogue is good too!

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In today's Voidchild, our protagonist briefly mulls over her new epitaph:

[GFalconDX]

I like how you drew her facial features on the 1st and 3rd panel. I'm not too sure what her expression is supposed to be on the last panel, but then again the text was a little hard to read. I also like the perspectives for the background. Good job!

Here's the latest page from my comic: