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mariusthered 2016-06-01 18:10:29 UTC #716

@Symphorians lovely artwork, I found the teacher character interesting, I have a principal that looks a little like her they both have that( strict and don't mess look)

and the new page of Talesfromswipecity

HOME 2016-06-01 18:51:24 UTC #717

@aronthemason Cool. Good job. Goood goood job! No, really, it's very original.

And some panels from the latest page of my sci-fi comic HOME:

donathinfrye 2016-06-01 22:07:16 UTC #718

@HOME

I'm already a subscriber. Your illustration is extremely polished and vibrant. Your vertical scroll technique is extremely good -- coming from someone who doesn't tend to like vertical scroll. Your use of animation is extremely effective. Your story is super immersive.

In short, you have the start of one hell of a comic on your hands, and it's very evident to me how much preparation and time you've put into this project. You're doing something different and ambitious, and I like seeing that. Very excited to see your work continue.

And here's the newest page from my own little space opera mystery -- ATONEMENT. This is the first page that I did the lettering for -- I'll be doing the lettering from here on out.

Greg_Dickson 2016-06-02 04:08:34 UTC #719

@ donathinfrye

Wow, your art is insanely detailed! I actually had to squint to determine whether your first panel was painted, or was 3D-rendered. Details like the sheen on the woman's dress really sold it. Also, I really like your usage of the black and white text bubbles to differentiate between who is speaking. It immediately makes it incredibly easy on the eyes to read (also, the red text at the end was a nice touch to give those words some added importance.

Here's the newest and final prologue page [Prologue (3)] from my comic, Don't Be A Hero (you may need to click on the link to get a better idea of what it's like by seeing the full-sized image, as the text is really small on the forum picture):
https://tapastic.com/series/Dont-Be-A-Hero

myimaginarypals 2016-06-02 12:47:11 UTC #720

@Greg_Dickson great inking, I really enjoyed your strip and am subscribing

Please subscribe to...
https://tapastic.com/episode/36627

mariusthered 2016-06-03 07:44:13 UTC #721

I know the feeling well lol

today I big secret came to light in my comic so i posted a double page! he's the first

to see the next page ( or sub) it's here Talesfromswipecity

TheVoidchildProject 2016-06-05 18:26:02 UTC #722

@aronthemason Your art is crips and clean and the characters are distinct from one another. I'm not sure, but it looks like you're using 3D-model backgrounds for your work. For me personally this creates a sort of dissonance when looking at the panels. I noticed a few errors in the lettering too. I like the flow of the story, from reading these panels. It seems like a nicely paced comic. Good work!

Newest page of Voidchild in which I'm back to drawing cityscapes and such and I don't really remember how to....

Kaos_Comics 2016-06-06 07:38:34 UTC #723

@TheVoidchildProject good job as always!

This weeks Juvies

Merle 2016-06-06 13:32:47 UTC #724

The page above me is quite unique in it´s humor. Either I missed something or it is not my type of humor...
but the art is pretty good.

Here´s the newest page of my Thriller/coming of age Patterns in Snow:
https://tapastic.com/episode/369609

TheVoidchildProject 2016-06-12 09:37:53 UTC #725

@pearl1 I'm not a big fan of "see-through speech bubbles". It kind of throws me off as I try to look through them. You're good with perspectives. Interior car scenes are always difficult. Or at least I feel so, but I didn't get stopped up by this reading your page. The pacing and dialogue is good too!

In today's Voidchild, our protagonist briefly mulls over her new epitaph:

GFalconDX 2016-06-13 03:55:50 UTC #726

I like how you drew her facial features on the 1st and 3rd panel. I'm not too sure what her expression is supposed to be on the last panel, but then again the text was a little hard to read. I also like the perspectives for the background. Good job!

Here's the latest page from my comic:

Kaos_Comics 2016-06-13 10:31:53 UTC #727

@GFalconDX nice perspection in last panel. I think in the 2nd panel you should've actual added a glowing effect to the crystal instead of the text "glow"

Juvies up as usual!

Dont forget to like and subscribe.

Wolven_Sister 2016-06-14 07:20:09 UTC #728

@Kaos_Comics I love puns!! I found the colors vibrant and the jokes needed. Sure I've heard the ol' "nice melons" joke before, but I never get tired of these puns and the fact you ended it with a Kissing Booth at the end put a nice twist I wasn't expecting. Also I really like your art style, I can see it being identifiable if I see any of your comics posted on other media outlets :')

Here's my latest page from my fantasy/romance Between the Realms, it's been a while since I posted here so....
here you go!
**Currently doing a Q&A for my readers, henche the little additions at the bottom of the recent pages*

Kaos_Comics 2016-06-14 09:18:00 UTC #729

Thanks @Wolven_Sister These are still back from 2008. The artwork only gets better.

donathinfrye 2016-06-14 15:40:04 UTC #730

@Wolven_Sister I love the coloring on this page. The textures are great, the outlining effective and distinct, helping to pop the characters out of the dark background and create a great look for the web. The only thing that confuses me is the paneling .... those two half panel breaks in the lower image -- I'm not sure what they are trying to convey. It may be that they're not trying to convey anything other than a sense of style! But it did make my brain go "???" a bit.

My new page of Atonement!

Amelia 2016-06-14 22:37:05 UTC #731

@donathinfrye
The art looks really good! I like the blend of painterly art, with 3D rendering. It makes everything look really solid.
If you don't mind a small critique, be sure to look for consistency. Especially since it takes so long to make one of your pages. Melissa's dress went from being shiny on page 13 to being flat on page 14.
The characters look fun, and the plot has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, I'll be tagging along for the ride.

Here's my latest page of Maddy Scientist.

indagold 2016-06-14 22:50:53 UTC #732

I like the sorta anime style. Only thing I can say is maybe there could be more in the backgrounds but outside of that it looks good.

Here's my latest page of https://tapastic.com/series/Welcomeback :

... if you're gonna critique this, I made this 5 years ago so what you'll be telling me is what I already know XD

phen 2016-06-14 23:45:53 UTC #733

Okay, let me get in a time machine and critique this en proper...

Hah, no, this is great. I really enjoy the dark, isolated atmosphere you're using to portray the mood. It's really somber and the blue cloak worn by the focused character here brings attention to her facial expressions and reactions she has. Each panel's unique backgrounds really bring her away from reality, too. It's all very surreal! Seriously intriguing designs and dream world!

Here is the latest page from There's No Such Thing as Jason - I.T.! A confession on the horizon, oh my~

TheVoidchildProject 2016-06-15 15:52:15 UTC #734

@phenylketonurics Man, your paneling is so excellent. There's such an "in and out"-feeling to your pages. And as I've mentioned before, your art is so rad and distinct. I just get the feeling that you've been drawing like a pro for like forever. I haven no constructive criticism to offer at this point as there's nothing I can put my finger on about this page. Excellent work!

In today's Voidchild, the light's go out.

PotooGryphon 2016-06-15 16:34:38 UTC #735

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