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[Kaos_Comics]

@TheVoidchildProject good job as always!

This weeks Juvies

[Merle]

The page above me is quite unique in it´s humor. Either I missed something or it is not my type of humor...
but the art is pretty good.

Here´s the newest page of my Thriller/coming of age Patterns in Snow:
https://tapastic.com/episode/369609

[TheVoidchildProject]

@pearl1 I'm not a big fan of "see-through speech bubbles". It kind of throws me off as I try to look through them. You're good with perspectives. Interior car scenes are always difficult. Or at least I feel so, but I didn't get stopped up by this reading your page. The pacing and dialogue is good too!

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In today's Voidchild, our protagonist briefly mulls over her new epitaph:

[GFalconDX]

I like how you drew her facial features on the 1st and 3rd panel. I'm not too sure what her expression is supposed to be on the last panel, but then again the text was a little hard to read. I also like the perspectives for the background. Good job!

Here's the latest page from my comic:

[Kaos_Comics]

@GFalconDX nice perspection in last panel. I think in the 2nd panel you should've actual added a glowing effect to the crystal instead of the text "glow"

Juvies up as usual!

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[Wolven_Sister]

@Kaos_Comics I love puns!! I found the colors vibrant and the jokes needed. Sure I've heard the ol' "nice melons" joke before, but I never get tired of these puns and the fact you ended it with a Kissing Booth at the end put a nice twist I wasn't expecting. Also I really like your art style, I can see it being identifiable if I see any of your comics posted on other media outlets :')

Here's my latest page from my fantasy/romance Between the Realms, it's been a while since I posted here so....
here you go!
**Currently doing a Q&A for my readers, henche the little additions at the bottom of the recent pages*

[Kaos_Comics]

Thanks @Wolven_Sister These are still back from 2008. The artwork only gets better.

[donathinfrye]

@Wolven_Sister I love the coloring on this page. The textures are great, the outlining effective and distinct, helping to pop the characters out of the dark background and create a great look for the web. The only thing that confuses me is the paneling .... those two half panel breaks in the lower image -- I'm not sure what they are trying to convey. It may be that they're not trying to convey anything other than a sense of style! But it did make my brain go "???" a bit.

My new page of Atonement!

[Amelia]

@donathinfrye
The art looks really good! I like the blend of painterly art, with 3D rendering. It makes everything look really solid.
If you don't mind a small critique, be sure to look for consistency. Especially since it takes so long to make one of your pages. Melissa's dress went from being shiny on page 13 to being flat on page 14.
The characters look fun, and the plot has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, I'll be tagging along for the ride.

Here's my latest page of Maddy Scientist.

[indagold]

I like the sorta anime style. Only thing I can say is maybe there could be more in the backgrounds but outside of that it looks good.

Here's my latest page of https://tapastic.com/series/Welcomeback :

... if you're gonna critique this, I made this 5 years ago so what you'll be telling me is what I already know XD

[phen]

Okay, let me get in a time machine and critique this en proper...

Hah, no, this is great. I really enjoy the dark, isolated atmosphere you're using to portray the mood. It's really somber and the blue cloak worn by the focused character here brings attention to her facial expressions and reactions she has. Each panel's unique backgrounds really bring her away from reality, too. It's all very surreal! Seriously intriguing designs and dream world!

Here is the latest page from There's No Such Thing as Jason - I.T.! A confession on the horizon, oh my~

[TheVoidchildProject]

@phenylketonurics Man, your paneling is so excellent. There's such an "in and out"-feeling to your pages. And as I've mentioned before, your art is so rad and distinct. I just get the feeling that you've been drawing like a pro for like forever. I haven no constructive criticism to offer at this point as there's nothing I can put my finger on about this page. Excellent work!

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In today's Voidchild, the light's go out.

[PotooGryphon]

Since there's a thread already established for sharing all of our latest page posts, I'm retiring this thread.

Visit this thread to share your page post.

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