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The Official-For-Now "How Does This Look??!?" Thread

How to use this thread:

This thread is for any creator/artist who is experimenting with new styles, new programs, new brushes, and anything else artistically that they might want a second opinion on from their fellow creators, whether you're starting a new comic, or switching styles in your currently running comics, or just trying to decide which outfit looks better on your character.

Pictures speak louder than words! Posts are recommended to have a "before" and "after" (OR a "picture A, picture B" picture included, for easier comparison, or as many samples as you can provide so people can give you a clear analysis and opinion. Don't be afraid to share result sketches either if you end up changing your design! (especially if we helped you out with it; we'd love to see the final results!)

If you're not comparing one piece with another, and just one some feedback on one piece of art, then please upload the image so we can see it and give you our feedback.

Be sure to express your opinions clearly, concisely, and kindly. If you think Picture A looks better than Picture B, state why in a respectful manner, but remember that everything's subjective, and no one is obligated to agree with you. Don't be unnecessarily hostile or rude when expressing your opinions, either.

Ex. "I think the coloring works a lot better here than it does there because of these following reasons!"

works a lot better than . . .

"i like this better because it's better and the other one looks like garbage."

Try your hardest to include some reasons other than "I like it more". Elaborate on why, whether it's the style or the color choice, or whatever reason it may be. It helps the creator pinpoint what they can fix too if they feel it needs fixing!

Creators, remember that your choice is final. When sharing comparisons and having a hard time deciding, take people's feedback into account, but don't feel obligated to picking one or the other just because more people side with one. At the end of the day, it's still your decision, and it's still your comic.

HOWEVER

Do not post if you're already set on your decision. If you're just looking for validation in your decision, then ask people for their opinion on the design you're sure of, see if there's anything that needs fixing. But don't come into this thread and ask for people's opinions and then deliberately argue and fight with anyone who happens to disagree with you. If you aren't looking for varied feedback and opinions that don't line up with your own, don't come in asking for it.


That's pretty much it! Hope we can get lots of use out of this thread!

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Here132 is my first draft of my first page of my first comic, Dislocated, currently no idea what to put for a title card so there's just white space at the top, i want feedback on the dialog though, different font, edit the text, et cetera.

Uzuki! ** raise hand ** got a Question here!

Is it acceptable to post images here asking help on certain technique, like; Perspective, Line, Proportions?

Or this Thread is PURELY artistic design ONLY?

Thanks for reading!

You're definitely on to something with the way you're handling the colors! I'd say the main thing that stood out to me was that when it comes to outlining, I would always stick to darker colors. So the color that is filled in should always be lighter than the outline, unless you want to give the impression that the object is glowing or something. Other than that, it never hurts to outline with all sorts of colors, so long as they're dark enough imho!

Not bad! But there is a lack of punctuation pretty much everywhere. Be sure to fully indicate where one sentence ends with a period or question mark. Also in Satan's last speech bubble, it should be "It's why you're here" instead of "your"

Also in this section, I was unsure which bit of text to read after the skeletons' question in the bubble. Am I supposed to read the white text? Because my eye immediately jumps to Satan's speech bubble.

So I feel a little bad about posting this because I just started my webcomic here but I've been experimenting with color so may end up posting new pages. I've always had issues choosing colors that look good so I'm not really sure how I feel about so any advice would be helpful. Below I have the original first page posted next to the once with color (the second one I haven't changed the color of the text yet but I do plan to to make it more readable).

I've been experimenting recently with painting in Bent Pins when I have enough time to put a little more effort into it, and I was wondering what people thought. I know it's not perfect, but I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions. Been mostly just using the dry brush in photoshop.


I think I could be doing more in terms of highlighting, but I'm not really sure how to make the highlighting not stand out in a really awkward way

I think the color palette looks good. You're off to a good start! A whole other thread can be devoted to color theory though so if you really want help in that department you can create a new topic. But if you just want to experiment with different color palettes, I highly recommend this site, design seeds7, where they draw palettes from photographs.

Hey guys. Yesterday I made my first comic post for my Naruto Spin-Off4 series but i'm debating how I should do my panels.
Here's a screen shot of the two styles:

The one on the left is what I posted yesterday but I think I'm leaning towards the more standard boxed panels on the right.
Because the series is called Konoha Delinquents, a friend of mine suggested that it would be cool if all the panels were out of shape and distorted like they are on the left. He said this kind of accentuates the idea that the students are problematic and outside the norm. Which I agree with but I feel like it just doesnt look as... nice? But that would be the whole point right.. for it not to look neat and tidy. But maybe thats not a good idea to do that because readers might feel it just looks messy and amateur, putting them off forever? Maybe its a bit too "edgy" you know. Pretentious even?... Im really not sure. The one on the right looks nicer to me but its hard to tell if thats just because its what Im used to.

What do you guys think. I really could use the feedback!

I kind of like the one on the right more, but the left side has its own charm too. Maybe you could play around more with the left side? Try some really wacky things and you might find the right balance? (side not I love the expression of your character in the first panel hehe)

I kind of like the one on the right more, but the left side has its own charm too. Maybe you could play around more with the left side? Try some really wacky things and you might find the right balance? (side not I love the expression of your character in the first panel hehe)

Awesome. Thanks for that suggestion and the sidenote smile Yeah im leaning to the right too... but I guess im worried that im just being a chicken by playing it safe with that one.

Just joined...as of yesterday! Our team has worked for over a year to make our Dead Last16 comic book a reality. Curious to get your feedback on if the look works? We're going for "Full Metal Jacket" meets "28 Days Later" with a bit of "Hunger Games" in the mix...Zombie Hunger Games that is...Also would like to know what type of zombies that haven't been used/over-used and what people want to see in our zombies. Keep in mind that our first issue has a lot of sociopaths posing as zombies. Confusing enough already?? stuck_out_tongue

I'm working on my manga's style, and this is what I ahve so far. The main problems I'm having is I don't know how much color to have, how much crosshatching/shading is enough, and if I should just go like full painted instead. Maybe with lineart too? Not sure.

9 days later

I think the one on the right is better, because the plain boxes don't draw your eyes away from the pictures, whereas on the left, they are distracting.

Thanks for the feedback. I ended up going with something kind of inbetween. Basically just doing thin boxes but then going over it with a thicker and intentionally messy black line. Im satisfied with the look now smile

It also lets me augment the emotion I want to deliver in a panel by drawing the borders messier and uglier depending on what the character is expressing. Check out my comic4 if you want to see what I mean smile

You kept the feel of the thicker boxes, whilst not taking too much attention from the pictures inside.
I like it -- it has the best of both box types.~ (>uo)

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hello everyone! I am trying to decide on the main title typeface for my comic Reus5, but I'm having a hard time finalizing on which one I like best. What do you all think looks the most appealing? 1,2,3, or 4?


I know they are all similar, which is part of the reason I'm struggling =_=
Here2 and Here3 are some banner images with the fonts I have used thus far. There's nothing particularly wrong with either of those fonts--in fact I quite like them. But I wanted to create something a little more unique/memorable.
thoughts??

p.s. I've only included the font-aspect for now. I will add other elements (e.g. symbols and the like) once I've decided which of the four I like best!

I would go with #4. Looks easier to read compared to the others.

I would go with 3 as it has the space as logo number 4 yet doesn't have the large s that closes the smaller case letters. The small s could go with a bit more line thickness as the s is harder to read.

I like number 1 because it's a lot more stylized than the others. However the other ones are easier to read, so I think 3 would be the best one smile The space in 4 makes it look a little too scribbley, 3 is sort of the happy medium IMO.

23 days later

I like this! And if it's a style you're comfortable with, I say go for it! It kinda reminds me of a mix between All This Doubt and awut. Very nice! ~ <3

I'm pretty confortable with this style. I made it in a way I can draw fast, because I don't have much time.
I'm happy that you liked it smile

Hey! Since my switch from b/w to color pages, I've been trying to tweak things a bit to help tone down the digital look. So far I've got this(below). Is that better, worse, or do you guys have any other suggestions? Thanks in advance!

Current Page 5:

Slightly Tweaked Ver.

I like the slightly tweaked version better. They're both well done, but I think the second one is more interesting. It adds texture and matches the gritty western theme you seem to have going.

Thanks for the help! I thought the same thing myself, but I was also worried a bit about adding too much too it. Looks like I've got some thing new to add next chapter! ^^

I think I actually prefer the first one, the characters seem to stand out more and it looks cleaner. If you are going to use the second method I would recommend reducing the grain on your points of focus. (e.g. the walking character and the fellow with the red hat)

Very true! It's all on another layer, so I just need to lower the opacity some more and it should be good. Thanks for the help, Young Adventurer!