@Lucca_Vendramel it's cute, and I can definitely see the potential you see! My biggest critique would be readability, since the font frequently changes and sometimes its pretty small! Congrats on making it to Ch.2! Keep going!!
I just recently reached Ch.2 on mine too!
If you're interested in creepy stuff, self-absorbed youtubers, cults that meet in dead shopping malls, or if you just really hate onions... you might like Alli Ascending!!
