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Sep 2021

I'm thinking of adding a prologue to The Millionaire's Heir but it would be a mature chapter because it is about a character recovering from a failed suicide attempt. Do you guys think this would deter potential readers?

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If the story isn't going to have a bunch of mature chapters, it might mislead readers or make them wonder why only the first chapter is mature. If you're OK with that though, then it's fine.

I see your point. I don't have a ton of mature chapters, maybe 10% of the story.

I guess my best bet is to write it in a way that it somehow doesn't require the mature filter...

It depends what sort of failed suicide you're going with. Generally, you only need a mature filter for nudity, sex and violence. Suicide or the aftermath, don't actually require it unless you intend to show violence or gore with it or show it graphically, which is generally advised against anyway. However, it's generally considered good form that if you're going to deal with issues like suicide, you have some kind of content warning at the start of the story or chapter. That way people know that it's coming and can decide if they want to continue or not.

Is it possible to flash back to this scene, instead of have it as a prologue? Like chapter 1 start of the current story, and chapter 2 be the jump back to what would be the prologue?

Thanks for your input! In that case, I think I can write in a way that I don't need a filter