Hi! I don't usually write so this is something new for me. I just started this series and I want some feedback on how to make it better. If anyone is willing to read my book please do, thanks!
My story is a murder mystery and it's about this girl who was blamed for a sister's murder many years ago and now, new murders have been occurring around her and everyone has been accusing her again. She decided to take a look into the case in order to clear her name, thinking it would be a simple case, but it turned out to be much more complex. Here's the summary I wrote on Tapas:
Parishi Mohan died 12 years prior and everyone blamed her sister, Soniya Mohan, for her death. When a mysterious boy arrived, murders started taking place all over town, with everyone pointing fingers at Soniya. However, while everyone was busy blaming her, Soniya decided to investigate these murders herself. Who was this boy and why did these murders start exactly when he arrived? Will Soniya be able to clear her name and catch the murderer before everyone in her town dies? Or worse, before she dies?
Anyway, I'd really appreciate if someone read my story! I'm willing to read someone else's story for feedback as well!
Here's the link! https://tapas.io/series/The-Murderers-Game/info
