Used to drawing, New to comics

[Katharpy]

Hey! I'm Kat and I've been drawing seriously for about 11ish years now and I've just started a revamped version of a mspa-forum story I (embarassingly) did years ago. Hopefully it will be way longer and better written with way more content and character development.
I'd love for some comments/feedback/critique and I hope you all like it!

Heres some few screenshots for those who want a taste of the art style.

[amber-rae]

Hi! I enjoyed your comic The set up was very clean and easy to read and the character designs I love I guess the only critique (It's not really one) I would have is I got confused during the dream but that's how dreams are so I appreciated it once I realized they where dreaming.

[Katharpy]

Thank you so much! I wanted the dream sequence to be a bit confusing. (You know how dreams are!)

[punkarsenic]

this is really good?? full of movement, succinctly sets up the characters and world, clear whats happening, good levels. its great

i dont actually have any critique to give you, it definitely doesnt show that youre new to comics (youre even doing the diamond lettering thing, which most people miss all the time) id say, to move from here, you should read the understanding comics series by scott mccloud, because its a real eye opener and will likely give you lots of interesting ideas. (the first ones easy enough to find online for free but u didnt hear that from me)

hadephobia has a great start, ill be watching closely for a brilliant middle and amazing ending.

[revisionstudios]

Love the art style, looks great so far! The narrative flows well and it seems like an interesting premise. I can't really comment on the writing since there's isn't much yet, but so far so good! The characters feel distinct and real. Nice job!

[Katharpy]

wow thank you so much! Can i ask what diamond lettering is?

[Katharpy]

thanks! I'm not much of a writer so i hope the writing is the weakest point (vs anything else)

[punkarsenic]

its where you format lettering with the smallest line on top, gradually getting longer into the middle, then smaller again, to form a diamond shape, because this fits best into a bubble. (theres exceptions like dont leave 'to' separate from its 'place' and dont leave bolded phrases separated but generally this is the rule)