I subbed to prince Claran cause he got my attention because his design.
As others has said on the feedback, the font sizes and the use of the current handwriting made me difficult to read it but thanks the images I had an idea of what was happening without zooming (yeah I zoomed but the handwriting needs to be more clear), I saw a fast improvment on your art from the first pages to the last one. Keep the good work.
heres my story