Uohkai. I'm sorry, I actually forgotten about this. ^^;;;;
Anyway, I will only be drawing Grace. Since I don't ask you the details about her appearance, she might looks very different from what you wanted her to be.
(In this angle she actually looks smaller than the original...)
I don't shade her hair.
You said traditional Japanese closings, but theres many forms of them and I didn't know which era you want her clothes to be. She wears a hakama over a normal kimono, thought it was generally only worn by males in the past, it could be wore by both sexes nowadays.
Well, sorry for being late, I hope you like her even a bit tho. ^^;