Oh wow, thank you! That's really awesome.
Also, a tip I'd like to give you is to begin a patreon. It might not do much now, but once people start to know you're drawing things, they can support you monthly. Give you some means to buy better gear and get some groceries out of the way!
Also, I forgot to mention in the description, but Alden has very light eyes. A light blue nearing to grey. I know you're not drawing in colour, but that might help a little figuring how dark stuff should be 