the concept seems cool, especially allies ability to build robots that do what she wants, despite being enslaved by robots. that could be really interesting. im not sure why exactly robots, who wear less and can be rebuilt and work faster, would bother making humans do their labour, though.
you draw robots a lot better than you draw humans - they have great form, gesture, and detail. your humans look especially odd next to them, because the art style is different, and you need to develop your understanding of anatomy and apply it. or just make a comic of 100% robots because they do look great.
you could do with developing your backgrounds a lot more - as is, it looks unfinished and messy. similarly, you need to draw with smoother lines, or use a pen that isnt as harsh so it can accommodate a sketchy style - but really, clean it up, fiddle with your stabiliser settings, cause youre super wobbly.
allie goes off model a lot? its one thing cartoon-ising an expression here and there, but you seem to switch up styles every time you draw her and its dizzying.
sorry, this is mostly pretty negative, but theyre just things to be aware of.
