Hey there, Mavros here. I just came back from a huge hiatus (Things didn’t look so great for me in this year) and I’m trying to reach 100 subs. That said, I’m not here to spam myself, I just genuinely want some feedback on my story. I ask you to read something on this story and give me your thoughts on it, even just the prologue will be fine. Thank you for the time.
PLOT
Survive.
A mission that all Blendbreeds must face every day. But in the Otherworld, a parallel dimension where monsters and masked deities intertwine with the fate of mortals, there are protected places—sanctuaries where one can learn to control their powers and grow in safety.
One of these is the Lilies Park, the setting for the meeting of two younglings who play a role in a story woven by primordial hands.
Marina, daughter of the goddess of intellect, grapples with the responsibility of guiding new arrivals, uncovering secrets that threaten to destroy everything she holds dear. On the other side stands Shirei, the enigmatic mortal with violet eyes, devoid of memory, emerging from a past shrouded in mystery. He carries with him an unsettling calm and fragments of a power too dangerous to wield.
An ancient and malevolent force looms over the Lilies Park and the entire Otherworld. An army waits at the gates, ready to strike.
The revelation of a single lie could change everything.
Who are the Blendbreeds truly? And what price must they pay to survive in a world fractured by their very existence?
An epic novel that explores the boundary between mortal and divine, between one’s identity and the destiny they are meant to fulfill.
INFORMATIONS
-Slow paced in the beginning since I focus very much on making a story that is coherent.
-World building added chapter by chapter.
-Slow character development, I like to do things step by step.
-Strong male lead, the mc is basically fated to become the strongest but it will be a long journey.
-Detailed magic system (just trust me).
