Why'd you put the summary in the chapter instead of in the summary section
but fr imo if your novel's only at an idea stage maybe write out some more details so you have a concrete story line
also the line about gods is kinda iffy
and those quotes aren't really helping me get a feel for the story at all
it sounds more like some kind of advice book? Idk, I think this just overall isn't a good first-impression, since it isn't clear what we're getting into
I recommend making a short and sweet summary first, so you and your audience get a less vague idea of what's to come