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Hi there. This is my very first post here so I would appreciate some tips if you have any.

I been working on a fantasy story for a while now, I have some mature topics and I wanna know if there are appropriate for the site. Tho I tried to be as tastefull as possible with it.

Those topics touch violence and abuse against children, including death, specifically done by a cult (villains of the story), tho is just up to four episodes, I'm worried for my novel or account to be banned if they surpass the guidelines, even with the mature tag.

The scenes in question include an adult shobbing a kids face into the dirt and the following paragraphs (from chapters not published yet):

"He slammed her into the ground, preventing her from getting up by placing a knee on her chest. The girl struggled with all her might to no avail, while Vincent stood frozen at the scene."

"The rock fell, a strong impact splashing blood on the little boy’s face, blow after blow the girl’s cries intensified until, suddenly, they stopped."

"Cardinal Figueroa followed the instructions of the high priest, dragged the little boy across the floor to the podium, secured him and waited outside... Figueroa received other instructions and prepared to follow them. Meanwhile, the little boy received several blows."

(Additional info: this specific kid is pretty much immune to their attacks, he is part of the main cast).

"Solomon pulled out his last resort, a whip of multiple strands, with metal spikes at its tips, and attacked the little elf without mercy. No matter how much both children screamed, the cardinal did not stop until the high priest told him to, until the child was inert, dying."

Those are the ones I'm worried about.

I want to touch the subject of sexual abuse and grooming as well, regarding a character who is an adult at the start of the story but was a teen when it happened, focusing on describing the feelings they go through before and after the fact more than the act itself, at much I think of mentioning it like "the whole time their mind wandered, waiting for it to end" or something along those lines.

I also board cannibalism as a curse, I describe how the person forced to do it feels about it during it happening, like describing the nausea and emotional pain they feel. This one is only described once, tho I want that specific scene to be impactful as to make the readers aware of what the cursed person goes though each time is mentioned or implied it happened again.

It would be helpful if anyone can provide examples (like sections from other novels that are on the platform) of what is acceptable in those subjects. I want to make sure not to surpass the limits of what is allowed here.

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Novels can get away with a lot more than comics since they aren't blatantly visual and rely on the reader's imagination. So you should be fine as long as you put the Mature tag on the episodes that contain these passages.

Doesn't look as bad as some stuff I used to upload.

Should be OK I think...