Ahh, I forgot to mention when I started this thread that I'm pretty proficient in comedy writing too for anyone who wants tips on that lol, both for writing comedic series and just comedic banter in scenes in other genres
From "Damsel in the Red Dress."
“Oh.” His lips part - eyes getting a little rounder than usual. “Oh, y-yeah. I think so. I’m supposed to be released Wednesday, and Utkarsh is gonna drive me home. It’ll be so nice to be in my own clothes again.” He adds with a cross between a laugh and a sigh.
“You must have been dying stuck in that white dress for all this time,” I can’t help teasing, “It’s not even stylish.”
He smiles roguishly, and I realize too late that I’ve walked right into the rebuttal-
“Yeah, it looks kinda like something you would have bought.”
and from my audio drama Lion Proof
Aaron: (as if to himself in a low mutter) And the tension was so thick you could attempt to sever it with various cutting implements but they all would get wedged in the middle-
Eliza: We need to talk.
Aaron: Oh no.
Eliza: This is the year I’m going to start my hair care company.
Aaron: (relieved) Oh…(worried again) Oh no. My brother warned me about this. No good ever comes from your wife listening to podcasts and watching Oprah...but I just laughed back then.
Eliza: I really want to do this Aaron.
Aaron: No, you think you want this but what you really want is a fad diet and a trendy new fitness discipline. How about kettlebell yoga? That’s in the budget.
Eliza: The more you tell me I shouldn’t the more I want to do it.
Aaron: Fine…then you SHOULD do it.
Eliza: Thank you.
Aaron: No! You don’t get to play both sides. Pick a lane and stay in it.
Eliza: Okay, the haircare lane.
@beebutterbee interestingly enough, we were talking about sci-fi yesterday, and yesterday I got accepted into, not sci-fi, but a speculative fiction magazine, so I now have a spec piece forthcoming, crazy timing.