novel? (+promotion)✨

diestreve319 2022-04-21 06:23:34 UTC #36

Thank you for your comments about Music in the Stars book cover and blurb.

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?

I love the gold color motif as well as the character's hair color and the font. So for the colors of the book cover, it captured my attention

Is the title interesting?
Yes, it's a unique title that's why the title is interesting.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
I think the story in the blurb is intriguing and it has a right and good length as a blurb. The blurb can still be improved to be more attention-grabbing.

Will you buy the comic/novel?
Based on the blurb and genre, it's not my cup of tea, but I'll give it a chance by reading the first pages to decide whether I'll buy the comic/novel.

diestreve319 2022-04-21 06:27:29 UTC #37

Thank you for your comments about Kataomoi No Ore - Story # 1: Dear Diary - Love, Sakura

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?
I love the simplicity of the book cover and the effects and color combination of the background and font. To make me grab it from the bookshelf, maybe add a picture/illustration that represents your story the best. But the book cover's simplicity hook and intrigued me honestly.

Is the title interesting?
Yes, the title is interesting.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
I like that the blurb is short and catchy but to be more attention-grabbing maybe adding more details could help it hook more readers who love the genre of your novel

Will you buy the comic/novel?
Based on the genre I'll give the novel as a gift to my relatives who loves stories like yours.

diestreve319 2022-04-21 06:29:54 UTC #38

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?

The color scheme and the background as well as the jewelry and hair color grab my attention and I really like the color motifs, combinations as it is very pleasing to the eyes.

Is the title interesting?
I'm not sure what the title means so that makes the title interesting and intriguing so great work with the title.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
I love the blurb. It does it purpose of making the readers curious about your story.

Will you buy the comic/novel?
Even if I'm not that into fantasy, I'll give it a read, and if I like it, I may buy the novel.

diestreve319 2022-04-21 06:33:24 UTC #39

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?
The uniqueness of the title and illustration and art style is what grabbed my attention so I'll definitely grab it from the bookshelf.

Is the title interesting?
Yes, the title is interesting especially those who love Isekai stories.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
Yes, the blurb does it's purpose very well and those who love genres/Isekai will have their attention definitely grabbed to check it out.

Will you buy the comic/novel?
I'm thinking the genre of your story is romance and comedy but more into comedy based on the book cover so I'm not into romance-comedies that much, I'm more into romance/tragedy so maybe not, but I'll give it a read before deciding if it's for me to buy or not.

diestreve319 2022-04-21 06:37:22 UTC #40

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?
The colors and art style is what intrigued me but maybe adding more details will make me grab it from the book shelf

Is the title interesting?
It's a great title and is interesting

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
The blurb is okay and will be attention-grabbing for those who like your genre.

Will you buy the comic/novel?
Since the story is not my preferred genre, then I'll probably not buy, but I'll definitely share it to those who likes stories like yours. As I said earlier, the color and art style is a nice touch to the book cover, as the coloring style and art style are attractive.

silenthisper 2022-04-23 06:57:51 UTC #41

Since I've already posted mine, I will reply now. By the way, the book I would be answering did be: Raindrops on Her Winter Hair.

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?(mention positive qualities of the book cover and what to improve.)

The book cover itself, it might not be necessarily eye catching but it's calming enough for me to be curious and grab it from the bookshelf. Something to improve... maybe actually add a background, pale shade of color to have something more eye catching instead of being a simple white background.

Is the title interesting?(mention positive things about the title. If it doesn't capture your interest, mention how to make the title more interesting)

The title itself is honestly what made me want to grab it from the bookshelf the first place. It gives off a calming yet poetic feeling.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?(mention the blurb's strong points and what to improve.)

I think the blurb itself is enough to caught people's curiosity. For example, like what you did with the last question.. that usually grabs people's curiosity pretty quickly. But, if you could expand on the blurb and make it longer... that might be even better since that can catch people's interest more and give them a better understanding of the book too.

Will you buy the comic/novel?(If no, mention who might buy the novel/target audience. If yes, mention why you'll buy the comic/novel, and optional: recommend the series to another reader that might enjoy reading it.

No, unfortunately on my end, I am not exactly a fan of romance novel in general.

IzzyBloom91 2022-04-24 03:26:57 UTC #42

The Fate of the Galaxy is in the hand of a criminal with Unusual Power and has resentment towards society for treating him as a pariah. Will he the galaxy salvation or its greatest downfall?
If you like a story of Devotion and Manipulation than look no further than this Fantasy-drama-Action- Romance.
How far will you go for the person that you care about?

conventurecomics 2022-04-24 04:35:50 UTC #43

I would buy my comic.

conventurecomics 2022-04-24 04:37:22 UTC #44

Try mine if your into comedy and anime conventions,

dhroobmanna 2022-04-25 21:28:08 UTC #45

Check out Iria. Its a fantasy story with a human-shapeshifter hybrid as the protagonist and his magical talking box.

Fuzzyman818 2022-04-25 22:24:20 UTC #46

I don't know if I could consider my series to be in a comic book. I see it being in a newspaper or a magazine. But if there is ever a compilation book of some of my best stripes that happens to make it's way into my local Books-a-million or Barns & Nobel, I'd pick it up.

diestreve319 2022-04-29 10:43:49 UTC #47

Thank you for your comments on Raindrops on Her Winter Hair.

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?
I love the book cover as it has a romantic classic feeling to it, a timeless one with a story with an old timeline. That's my impression if I saw your book cover at a book store.

Is the title interesting?
Yes, it is intriguing and fits the overall vibe and design of your book cover.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
I love that the blurb has a poetic feeling to it as I'm into poetic stories. The length is also great as a blurb. What could make it attention-grabbing is to hook me as a reader/readers to become curious enough to flip the pages of your novel.

Will you buy the comic/novel?
I love the book cover and the title. The blurb didn't grab me as a reader that much so I may read the first pages to determine if I'll buy your novel or not so 50/50 as of now.

diestreve319 2022-04-29 10:47:19 UTC #48

Hi, everyone whom I tagged, I hope you can fill-up the form with the questions which can be found in my opening thread where you can comment about the book cover of anyone who posted their book covers here, including me. After posting the form with the questions, I might comment on your book cover or others who participated in this thread. I will take time to comment on most book covers here, but I prefer if others who participate here will comment on other book cover/book covers as well.

Here's the form you need to fill up. Thank you

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?(mention positive qualities of the book cover and what to improve.)

Is the title interesting?(mention positive things about the title. If it doesn't capture your interest, mention how to make the title more interesting)

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?(mention the blurb's strong points and what to improve.)

Will you buy the comic/novel? (If no, mention who might buy the novel/target audience? If yes, mention why you'll buy the comic/novel, and optional: recommend the series to another reader that might enjoy reading it.

J.K.Borealis 2022-05-04 11:15:12 UTC #49

Thank you so much for a detailed review of the cover!
It provides the much needed insight
You're really good at this!

J.K.Borealis 2022-05-04 11:18:25 UTC #50

Thank you for your insight! It's much appreciated <3
The blurb is as it is because I don't want to spoil anything. I'm very particular in how I deal with the exposition in the comic, so much in fact that the "duo"'s names still haven't been said in more than 20 episodes xD
Thank you once again!

Nossumy 2022-05-04 11:32:39 UTC #51

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?
Going through the bookstore I notice the cover that piques my interest. I like the overall composition. Grabs the book and turns it to the back to read the blurb.

Is the title interesting?
The title is interesting and intriguing. Itching to read the blurb. ^.^

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?
From the blurb, I'm not 100% sure if it's my cup of tea. Although it grabs my attention to learning more about the story.

Will you buy the comic/novel?
I would ask friend who read it first if is good. In case none of my friends read it, I would read trough first chapter and then decide if I want to buy it. ^^

J.K.Borealis 2022-05-04 11:35:33 UTC #52

diestreve319:

As you passed by the bookstore, did the book cover capture your attention? Will you grab it from the bookshelf?(mention positive qualities of the book cover and what to improve.)
I was drawn to the artwork immediately. It is very intricate and there is too much going on for my taste, but because the rest was not analyzable, my eyes were drawn to the faces of the characters, which I liked the moment I saw them. They both seem very beautiful and captivating. The art style reminds me of Yoshitaka Amano.

Is the title interesting?(mention positive things about the title. If it doesn't capture your interest, mention how to make the title more interesting)
The font fits the rest of the style but leaves me second-guessing myself if it really says "Athanasia", a word similar to my own title word and just as uninformative. That, though, wouldn't stop me from digging in.

Is the blurb/story description attention-grabbing?(mention the blurb's strong points and what to improve.)
The blurb is the strongest point in my opinion as it really got me hooked. It says just enough to set the stage, without revealing too much.

Will you buy the comic/novel?(If no, mention who might buy the novel/target audience.If yes, mention why you'll buy the comic/novel, and optional: recommend the series to another reader that might enjoy reading it.

I'd buy it, purely on the premise because it just happens to fit into things I'm interested in. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone until I read it. It's just a principle of mine, nothing to do with the cover itself.

zeitybitey 2022-05-04 23:26:22 UTC #53

Thanks so much for the kind feedback! I'll definitely use this to improve my upcoming novel

LouisWinter 2022-05-05 01:51:33 UTC #54

The world has just changed and everyone now have the power to claim it. A global event gave people supernatural abilities and a famous novelist aims to shape the world into the fiction he writes. The story focuses on two chracter's seperate journys being orchestrated to lay the foundation of a new world.

Probably the cover would compel people to skim through the pages.

system 2022-06-04 01:51:45 UTC #55

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