Imma keep it short…
I will tell her to keep writing, stop procrastinating, and stop writing in script format lol
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When a person laughs in the story just write that they laughed. Do not write, "Haaaaaaaaaaah haaaaaaah." Your sister will never let you forget it.
Lol. I actually still like Sly Cooper, but not enough to write a fanfic.
TO MY YOUNGER SELF,
THANKYOU FOR DAYDREAMING, IMAGINING RANDOM LORES IN A TOY FIGHT , IMAGINING FAN THEORIES IN POP, FOR TRYING HARD TO POLISH THE ART SKILLS I'VE TODAY, THANKYOU FOR LETTING ME CREATE A STORY NAME VOLKERMORD
I would tell my young teenage self to buy books about writing stories and scripts for comics/movies from Books A Million to become a better writer early on and seek writing partner to aid in the writing process. That way, he'll become a better writer early on rather than later in his mid-20s and then taking scripting classes in late 20s. I don't know if it will help out.
I would tell the younger me that it's okay that your writing isn't the greatest thing to have ever existed. You don't have to be the greatest writer to have ever walked the planet and instead you should just be you and continue learning. I would also tell the younger me that you don't have to put ellipses after every other sentence. That's not good writing.