It would have been really nice to have planned out the endings of each chapters, like, the lines that they'll end on so I don't get stuck in the cycle of hook-line writer's block, where the chapters kind of end on a low point no matter how many better places in the chapter there might have been for it to end. it's something to keep working on to make sure my story has proper escalation. I still like quite a lot of the hook lines I've written for both "A Dozen Morning Glories" and "Damsel in the Red Dress" though.
The one for the end of next week's chapter of "A Dozen Morning Glories":
Iâm still the one who will always be of no concern because I have no feelings to hurt.
This is just my reality. Horrible day or things going well.
This is as bad as it gets. This is as good as it gets.
the hook line ending of next week's chapter of "Damsel in the Red Dress":
And with every trickle of flaming red that runs into the white, I remind myself that I have a very weak stomach.
And I canât stand the sight of blood.