I have gotten some comments about my dialogue being too verbose whenever I ran into issues not having not having enough room to fit speechbubbles and the characters into the same panel. And upon further inspection, they probably have a point. Examples that come to mind are episodes 7, 8, and 9 but mostly 7 and 9. Now for context, starting in 2021, I began rewriting scenes for my comic's first chapter 1 because it was 3 years old by then and certain parts of it didn't age that well. This ranged from changing how scenes playout out to make them less rough and more interconnected (because looking back, a lot the scenes weren't connected in any way and it felt like stuff happened because they needed to happen) to rewriting/rewording dialogue scenes to be more punchy. This is important because around the time this was happening, I had gotten asked if English was my first language because of the amount of spelling and grammar errors in my comic's first episode (errors I have since made corrections too) by a discord user I had shown my comic to. I know he didn't mean that as an insult but I think that caused to be scrutinize and nitpick my own dialogue. And I feel that's what led me to make the dialogue more verbose and text heavy so no one would assume I didn't speak English even though its my first and only language. That and rewriting scenes out as if it was a movie which, shocker, doesn't work for comics.
I do actually wonder if this was a recent thing and was a symptom of not writing a chapter in a novelized fashion for 4 years, or was always the case and I never recognized it until now. I have skimmed over some dialogue exchanges in the chapter drafts I wrote before starting to draw my first chapter back in 2019, and it doesn't look like the latter might be the case. I am planning on looking at them in detail once I finish the first chapter so I guess I wont fully know until then XD