Uhh kinda I guess? I like the idea of tying an ink goal to a narrative event in the comic, it's probably not something that everyone could do. I think try he issues here have to do with
1) the quality of your comic is a bit janky imho, so it's naturally just gonna have a hard time finding readers. Please don't take this the wrong way. If you want I could give you A more detailed critique.
2) the "call to action" for the comic is a bit confusing. From what I understand it's "if we reach the goal the alien safe will open up + subscribe to this other comic and that creator will tip me" my immediate thought is "why doesn't the other creator just tip them? + Why should I tip if I'm not getting subscribers out of the deal?"
3) while this does in theory motivate your readers towards action, the action itself will not spread throughout their Network unless they choose to promote your comic for you. In order to hijack word of mouth you need to encourage your readers to share your comic with other people in some way.
Hope this helps