@AffectedMind I actually cannot review your new version of your comic. I'm sorry, but because of the mass amount of requests I receive, it would not be fair for me to review a creator more than once (at this point in time). I have a few people who have requested this as well and I have a separate list (not on my blog) to keep track of you all in case I ever have the opportunity to re-review creators.
However, I will go back to your review and mention that you have revised the comic so that readers are aware that your comic is very different now. I can tell you though that I am impressed with the amount of improvement you have made, not just in your art but in your storytelling as well. There is a lot more depth to the characters and the plot now. Well done!
Note: There are other people currently offering to write reviews. I recommend checking some of them out to see if they can review your comic!