Aikyo_yuri

Yuri

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this is my first novel ever please sent your thoughts.:blush: An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (P…

An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (PS. This is a second draft to see if the story is good en…

This is my first time writing please send me your thoughts.:blush: An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements…

An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (PS. This is a second draft to see if the story is good en…

This is my first time writing so please be kind.:blush: An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (PS. This…

This is my first time writing so please send me your thoughts.:blush: An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elem…

An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (PS. This is a second draft to see if the story is good en…

An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (PS. This is a second draft to see if the story is good en…

An interesting and exciting fantasy story set in a distant universe follows the Princess as she struggles to save her family from danger. Along the way, this space adventure portrays romance, action, friendship, mystery, and thrill elements. (PS. This is a second draft to see if the story is good en…

I have been working hard to finish my novel and would greatly appreciate it if you could take a look at it. Your honest opinion and feedback on how to make it better will be hugely beneficial.:blush: Hiraeth Novel [image]