
Buritsu
Buritsu
Australia <3 tapas.io/series/Millionscape
Hello! I have recently started a fantasy/mystery/action webcomic called Millionscape, and I am new and have almost no readers so I'd love some feedback on my story! I don't really know how tapas works but I want to make friends and meet people here if I can...
https://tapas.io/series/Millionscape
https://www.deviantart.com/buritsu
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Thanks for posting! 8D
Awesome! Looks great, I'll check it out! ^v^
I have a BL comic that I just started uploading, not many subs, would love more feedback The story is going to be pretty long and focus on a number of different male x male relationships >w<
I have a BL comic if anyone around here likes BL xDDD It's also on Tapas, but there are a lot more pages up on webtoons
Hello!
I just started a new BL comic, I'd love it if any BL-fans out there would check it out! It currently has zero subs ^^; I'd really appreciate some comments!
Also feel free to share your new/undiscovered BL comics with me (Under 50 subs!!!) And I'll check them out if I have time
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What do you guys think of this? the art style is pretty simple, but... XDDD
Thanks! Yeah for the mockup I didn't change where the lines of the drawings were so the boxes look really cramped... but in the proper version I'll space them out a bit more. You're right, I'll add more space and change them up depending on what is going on in the scenes ^^
Thanks for taking the time to give me some suggestions! I will follow this advice and change up how much white gap there is between panels, to create more air between scenes that need it. In my mock up I didn't change the placement of the pictures, but as I add it to the comic proper, I will try t…
Thanks for your reply Rhonder 8D Mm, mm, I agree. I tend to prefer the boxes too... but yes, if they are all closely packed together like that, it all reads at the same pace and there isn't much variety. When I start applying the panels for real, I will try to do what you say, and change the amoun…
Yeah you're right, I do like the boxes but I miss using the solid black... using solid black for night scenes is a good idea, thank you!
Hello! I'm looking for advice again. For borders in my comic I have just been using a solid black line.... because it's quick. But apart from looking lazy, it also cuts off speech bubbles when there is white space to the side of the page, so I was thinking about changing to "box panels". Doing the b…
AH thanks for putting this together, this looks great and was so much fun, thank you @KoreanTacos and @storytimebiondi !! (and yeah, I'm cool for you to show it on twitter or wherever else you like <333)
This turned out so pretty!! Awesome job! <3333
WAAAH this colour job is so cool! This was really fun to do and it was great to see my sketch transform into a coloured picture, thanks guys! Here is my coloured picture! Hope you like it! [image]
OMGG LOOOVE it turned out awesome!! Thanks!! Yeeey
Thank you! Colouring your sketch was very enjoyable, you can still give her a name if you want to! 8D and yeah, I also look forward to seeing her coloured~
Okay! Lineart is done, now I think this is for @storytimebiondi to colour when you have time! ^^ It was fun! [image]
Okay I did my sketch, it's my OC! Sorry for breaking the trend of girls and drawing a guy xD kept with the seasons theme and made it summer themed. The (old and terrible) ref for his colours is here> https://www.deviantart.com/buritsu/art/Isamu-Ref-736388085 (but of course, just do it however you li…
Yes, you'll be lining my sketch! Sorry for holding everything up >_< I'll also do Taco's lines and colouring on your sketch :3
Thank you!! Okay, gotcha! I'll probably do a sketch of one of the characters from my comic (and include a ref for colours) If the elf girl has no specific colours established already, I'll just have fun and make it up ^^ I might make one of those nine-square grids too, to keep track of it better xD
Sorry for being late! I still find the forum layout a bit hard to understand xD is this the lineart that I colour? I was also wondering which characters we draw, I kind of assume the person sketching would sketch their own characters? Is there a colour palette/ref for this character, or is it a newl…
Ahh cool, thank you!
Hi! I know this thread has probably got enough responses already, but it looks like a fun activity, if anyone is still open, I'd love to try it :3
I freaking love tourney plots, man, they're the best. Cameo?? What kind of cameo we talking about? XDDD Sounds fun!
yeah I'm making it bigger XD gotta redo it all uuuutgh XDD LOL hey your name looks familiar too xDDDD
Yeah, you're right, I will look at some caps fonts too. Thanks for your feedback!
Thank you very much! good to know, I think the sizing issues are mainly with viewing on a mobile phone but thanks for giving me your feedback!
Okay, thanks for letting me know! : )
Thanks for your feedback! I will go ahead and make the text bigger. I was going to leave the font but changing it would probably be good especially if sans serif fonts are known for reading more easily when appearing smaller. I'll take a look at some other fonts, thank you very much for your advice …
Ahh! Great, I see. Thanks for giving me your opinion