Kaiki
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I checked it out, had to read all three chapters and sub! I hope to see how this story develops 
If you wanna check mine out:
Thank you very much! The point about the synopsis especially. Good luck on your book! I'm open to hearing about your plans when you are ready to talk about it
Cool, I'll try to DM you either tonight or tomorrow. I you wanna check out my comic here it is:
Hey! Just subbed to you and read a few pages. I know your words were towards OP, but would you be interested in feedback here or somewhere else?
Already subbed to you, but wanted to contribute to your post
My MC Naomi is afraid of promises (not cheesy right?) primarily because broken promises are a big part of the story
Thank you for your contributions so far! Subs aren't everything; like and comments count for growth too. I would very much see what you like (or even don't like) in my comic if you ever have the time
Here's my story:
Subbed, mainly because I'm into stories with Asian-American characters right now (yours says American of Korean ancestors, but that counts right?) So I'll try to read some more when I have the time
Here's my story, which also features characters of Asian descent:
Subbed to both! And aside from promotions, I wanna say I really am in love with your character design
Here's mine if you could check it out:
Subbed and gave the first few chapters a quick read! It's a novel all right, and by that I mean it's length is more like a book than the short stories you tend to see around here (not a bad thing though!) I also notice the use of religious symbolism (Judas, Solomon, etc) and am interested to see how…
Subbed and liked your episodes! Hope the best for you and your journey .
Here's mine if you can check it out:
Just subbed! The art really complements the writing And the first chapter... I feel for the poor guy already
Coo! I'll check it out in a bit
Just subbed and liked some! Interesting choice of spacing between lines btw
Here my comic if you wanna read:
Are you a fan of Naruto 
Also, senzu noodle soup... I can't put my finger on it, I could have sworn I've seen something like that somewhere 
Takes me back to the days of stick games
Of course I'd help you out! You got one more sub from me
Here's mine if you can check it out:
Very cute! I subbed to you too!
Thank you! I subbed to you as well
Cool! I subbed to you too!
Just subbed!. Character art is your strong suit
Here's mine too:
Just subbed to your Webtoon! Here's mine if you wanna check it out:
Subbed to you, and here's mine! If you like it, yay sub! If not, please tell me how I could do better
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Likes, sub, and comments for you! But seriously, I really do like the story and art for what it is haha. Here's my story too!
Haha obligatory Japanese schoolgirl uniform
Haha say no more fam. Just wanted to say, in the first few sentences of the first chapter, I think you meant to write "breasts' instead of "beasts"
Just subbed! Beautiful cover, and the potential to draw people into history
I subbed to Chion and Kobi! Very cute, and the backgrounds are very well done
Cool! Could you post a link?
Very cute! This could very well be on a newspaper
Just read some of the first few paragraphs! I think some of the grammar is a little funky, but I do like the atmosphere described. I can be more specific if you need me to, but generally my favorite thing to do is read the dialogue aloud so you can tell what sentences need to be more natural. Anyway…