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Thank you! Your edit of the Strongo Drop-Kick makes the panel better i agree! :smiley: Funny thing about my manga is that episode 1 through 13 was originally supposed to be 1 chapter in the script. But the pacing felt all wrong so i slowed down things a lot! You said some things that were previously men…

if you really struggle with background, a good technique is using a model underneath, and in another layer draw by copying the model. You can go to sites like Sketchfab, type for example medieval village and screenshot. Then draw on top of the screenshot and add futuristic elements to get the result…

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It's better! The next step is to work on the spacing of your characters/props ! You have lots of empty space, try using things like the rule of thirds to make it more appealing! Look up storyboarding principles to know more about how to use space because it makes panels way better when you master th…

I was talking to @Demy ^^ I've done your review also though! It's message 76 i think

Yo Dbeirigo, I've read most of your comics! They are very short so it was easy to read through it all! I really like your style it is very funny to me. I used to draw almost exactly like this in middle school and highschool!! Quick stories that go super fast and make absolutely 0 sense but it's o…

I think you shouldn't redo your chapters because it's way too soon to do that!! Maybe a good solution is to create like a chapter 0 before where you tell us who the characters are and things like that? I think just this will fix 90% of problems! :smiley: Also my DMs are always open if you have any specific …

Hello Simonitropunk! I wrote in a post here a few weeks ago that i'll only start to review pieces that will offer me a review before or that say they will do it in the future because it's taking a lot of time from me to do this everyday. If i have your guarantee i will gladly do it! Because like i…

Hi Demy! Just read your comics ! Here's what i think: You have a style to your art, it doesn't feel generic like a lot of comic in this site. You're only big problem art-style wise is that you often can come off as being lazy when cleaning your art. Things that can easily be seen and fixed are lef…

Yep i went full shonen with it xD But it's on purpose, i just really like manga much more than western comic books. Thank you for the feedback fam, really appreciate you for giving time to this! I know it's not easy to find time when you're a full time artist. Thanks ^^

Don't worry english isn't my first language too xDD Thank you very much for the in-depth analysis! Very awesome! :smiley: And you gave some really good points! I do like to explain a lot lol!! I'll check out your comics as soon as i can fam!

Hello VersusVII! Yes you're supposed to read like in your screenshot. My comics is a manga so you read it from left to right like in Japan. As for your comics i just read it ( chapter 1) and here's what i think: I think the art is alright! You're character are well drawn but can feel a little …

Keep your cartoon style! That's not your main problem right now. If you look at the Bug's Bunny picture you've uploaded, you'll see that he has a very dynamic pose! For example if you color him all in black, you will still understand what he's doing, even if it's just his silhouette! For your monke…

You have a nice style that's reminiscent of ones in Visual Novels! Here's my two last pages ( in book format from right to left) [image]

Hello Diannamu! :smiley: Here's my review on your comics Coma ! I can tell that you know how to use photoshop ( or a similar app ) because you use good techniques that speed up the process and gives it a unique look. Be careful sometimes though: we can really tell when you use 3D models and when you don…

Hi WhoDrew!! Interesting concept you have here! Your comic reminds me of like short stories you would find in newspapers/magazines/etc ( like the Boondocks or Duck-tales ). A big advantage of that is that we can start reading from any point as long as we understand the major theme: two character…

You're very welcome! :smiley:

Thanks it would mean a lot! :smiley:

Yo Kevin! What a great comic man! I read in your bio you're an animator too! And it shows honestly, because your comic is like a very elaborate storyboard that i can see being animated later based on your panels. You master pacing perfectly, nothing felt jarring, scenes ended when they needed to …

Merci bcp mec !! J'aurais jamais pensé à ça tt seul, car effectivement je suis pas anglophone :slight_smile: Du coup je vais faire comme tu m'as proposé et demander de l'aide à ce niveau là!! C'est très utile ce que tu me dis... Je me sens limite con maintenant mdrrrrr Vraiment merci :slight_smile: Et pour Rennes malheur…

Yo moontokkym! Je viens de lire ton comics d'une trait! Une fois que j'ai fini la version française je suis allé voir le reste dans la version anglaise, ce qui est un bon signe: ça veut dire que j'étais curieux de voir la suite. Franchement, c'est du lourd. J'aime bcp ton style de dessin, je n'ose…

Wow i didn't expect such in depth review! Thank you very much fam!!!! And i 100% agree with you on the bad ! I tried to find solutions to make it better for mobile users but those solutions hindered computer users so i had no choice but to keep it this way! It's too bad that tapas forced us to use 9…

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IMPORTANT: A little head's up: I will 100% critique the 4 comics that were send to me that i still haven't read ( probably one a day ), but after that any further links send to me i'll critique only if a get a critique too. It takes a lot of time to read, take notes and even do manipulations of p…

Yo Doublekey! Wow your comic dates to 2020! That means a lot of what i'm going to say, you probably already figured out by now since 4 years have passed and you're (i would assume) a waaay better artist now. Actually your comic reminds me of the comics i used to make when i was in highschool!! I u…

Hello XiuLyun! I'd like to start by giving you context about me so you understand my critique: i am what you would call a boyish boy, like the type of boy who likes fights, doing pranks, basically being up to no good when i'm with friends and very allergic to lovy-dovy things xD I am incapable of …

Currently working on the rough of my latest chapter. This is the last page i've done: [image] Full comics:

Yo simplykit! You got an epic comic over here! I've read until they defeat the giant snake girl and the ninja accept to bring the MC with them ( something like 45 episodes ). The first thing i have to adress isn't in your comics but in your story synopsis! It's way too long and basically spoils ev…

Hello Stargazer! I just finished reading all your story in a single sitting! :slight_smile: I had a good time honestly, the pacing was fast ( but not too fast ) and to the point! which made the reading quite enjoyable ( i didn't force myself ! I genuinely wanted to keep reading :smiley: ). I can tell that you're someon…