NatAberdeen
Nat Aberdeen
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Nathaniel Aberdeen's Incomplete Biography of Revenants Anthology, a comedic mystery story involving the kind, tightknit community of Plainwood meeting all their biggest triggers: a newcomer, a resident in Riverside Road, and a left-hander.
Nathaniel Aberdeen's Incomplete Biography of Revenants Anthology is not just a mystery story with suspense and comedy, it's a case study, a look into the mindsets and emotions of each character who interacts the only left-handed person in Plainwood, with each other, and with themselves. It's somet…
I posted a new episode after a nine-month hiatus! I consider that a personal win 
Cool! It's always nice for small creators to interact with each other. I just joined
"Me and my crew have been hard at work meticulously putting together trays of hors-d'oeuvres and coups d'état for everyone" "Isn't it 'crudités'?" "...What? ...No, raw veggies are gross. In any case..."
This is so funny, I actually discovered Heroforge for the sole purpose of designing my characters! It's pretty cool to see other people using it for the same purpose too 
Here are my nine main characters: Vivian, Eileen, Matt, Morgan, Matt, Patrick, Anon, Dawn, and Kyle
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Plainwood is a secluded village that fears spirits such as ghosts, demons, and especially left hands. Natalie becomes the first person to move to Plainwood after so long and one of the only four people to move next to the forbidden House with the Hand Statue on it. How long until the town discover's…
There are pros and cons to both, I think. My current story uses the third-person because it's a big and deep look into the whole environment and the characters within. Other stories I'm working on use the first-person to make it more personal and focus specifically on the psyche of the main characte…
I started watching My Hero Academia a month or two ago and I recently finished season 4. I'm not a huge anime guy, but this is definitely one of my favorites. The character interactions are awesome
I sometimes get stuck trying to include just the right amount of details for a story to flow smoothly. If you add a lot, it may be easier for readers to understand, or it may feel like you're beating them over the head stuff they could have already figured out. If you add a little, it may give reade…
Context: Eileen retold an unrelated joke no one laughed at, before seeing someone she's been standoffish with. She frowned, “See, it was the way she said it that really made it fu—” Out of the corner of her eye, Eileen saw Natalie walk in the lounge with Morgan and that same uncertain smirk, “—ck.…
Thanks to Heroforge.com, I could make fully detailed profiles of my characters from my novel, NAIBRA. Here are my main ones Natalie Aureole, Eileen Pritchett, Matt Kennett Vivian Fay, Dawn Fay, Patrick Wells Morgan Bailey, Anon Denouement [image][image][image][image][image][image][image][image] …
Thank you very much! I'm always looking for ways to make my text more concise. I appreciate the feedback.
Here's NAIBRA, a story I've had in my mind for five or so years that I only recently started posting. (I really like how I wrote the first chapter, but I haven't been feeling too proud of the other two that I posted here yet. I often worry that the plot or characters aren't living up to their p…
I edit way too often. Sometimes I catch spelling or grammar mistakes, sometimes I think of a sentence or word I'd like to replace, but more often than not, I tend to think of completely new ways to refine and write a part of a chapter. I'm always really unsure of myself when I do do that, but once I…
Thank you so much! That really helps not only for just this, but as good advice for the rest of my writing! I appreciate you taking the time to write such a helpful and detailed response. I just modified my first chapter, and I couldn't help but think back to this thread when I was done!
I actually also just had the idea of instead using the introduction as a back-cover summary-type thing. I think it's perfect for that
Thank you all of you! I liked your introduction, but it did remind me a little of satire. I guess, that's to say, I found it a little humorous--in a good way. That's on purpose. My narrator has a very dry sense of humor So, I guess, if you feel the introduction will be relevant and properly se…
I've been rereading my story a lot to tweak some things that need tweaking. Recently, I've decided that my current starting paragraph is a bit too exposition-heavy and doesn't do a lot to hook people into the current story. I don't want to be overly expository, but I do enjoy a bit of background inf…
I doubt it's rare for creators to come up with better ideas the more they continue to write. The first draft of what was going to be To Kill a Mockingbird was completely different from the final product. I think that's fine, writers have the right to change what they do as they see fit. But postin…
I haven't posted the chapter this quote comes from yet, but I will be soon. Natalie steadily breathed in and out. “Well, you can rest assured I won’t be getting drunk tonight,” she joked and self-chuckled. “Hahaha, yes,” Matt Kennett pretended to understand, “it sure would suck if someone drank …
Hello, everyone! I'm a small creator here on Tapas and a mediocre artist. To clarify, I write novels here, not comics, so I'm not looking for anything big. I'm just looking for someone to make some normal character designs/illustrations that I can use in promotions, episodes, and other things like t…
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Sorry only some of them have faces, I don't draw my characters a lot anymore NAIBRA [image]
This is a really cool and nice thing for you to do! I'll be sure to check your story out
So here is NAIBRA, a mysterious, comedic story
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I just uploaded a new episode today
Rewrite the song "12 Days of Christmas" (it doesn't have to be good) by summarizing your novel. I'll start On the twelfth day at Plainwood, my true love gave to me: 12 lefties skulking All people raging Notes, smoke, and demons 1 hidden village 8 certain suspects 7 published journals 6 teachers t…
“Cool,” she said with the enthusiasm of a sidewalk, “I was really worried about that; thanks for reassuring me.”
"The worst omen that house brings is a single redheaded lesbian in her thirties,” she then gave the most depressing two thumbs-up ever seen.