TRock

T Rock

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No man, I'm open to all feedback, and I've been actively taking notes of what people are saying. I was just expressing my POV, I feel like I'm justified in explaining why I chose the way things were just for perspective.

Oh, yeah. In her backstory, Astra hails from another dimension but was adopted and raised on Earth.

I have a question, what do you think of the design regarding its own merit? For my world, it's a fantasy kitchen sink like Marvel/DC. I've laid out a system of how different characters look, and how far I can take it while maintaining internal logic. It's fun to see how different I can make charac…

So if I got rid of the lacing on the bustier and the boots, and changed the pantyhose to sheer, would that make the difference for the artist?

I just feel like the design is unique by having all these different elements and the way it's presented. How do I even move far away to avoid comparisons while still being aesthetically pleasing? Some things just unavoidable.

Her pale skin and black/purple eyes. Her "urban sorceress" look. Scarlet Witch looks like a, well, witch, and Zatanna a magician. Her bustier. Her style of hair. Her boots. These are all different from both to me.

I'd say I did that though. You can tell the influences there, but at the same time, she looks pretty distinct from the two in my honest opinion.

I have an original superhero comic I'm writing, and so I'd like to get constructive feedback on characters I post. This'll be a process, but here it goes. To begin: [image] Astra I commissioned this from Jero Pastor. She's a magical witch. The gist of it is …