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Ahh! Thank you for those examples. I see what you mean. You've helped a lot, thank you! 
I subscribed Your comic looks really good!
Thank you for such a detailed response! I agree with you completely, I like your example of the dialog. It sounds much better! I didn't even think about breaking up the dialog that way lol Could you please give me an example of how to exaggerate Luna's "hello" without adding more "o"s? And if p…
Hey everyone! I have 10 chapters out for my novel! So I decided that now would be a good time to get some feedback and see what people think! I really want to improve my writing while working on this, so I'm completely open to critique, tips and advice! I'm doing my best to learn, so any help would …
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
![[image]](https://forums.tapas.io/uploads/default/original/4X/e/9/f/e9fb4baa4a22cc0d7e76bd9660dfeed654e7063e.jpg){kind=link}
[image] IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you'l…
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
![[image]](https://forums.tapas.io/uploads/default/original/4X/0/9/7/0978d32b2be1a5c61df5be85ec7df7ebbba5473c.jpg){kind=link}
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
![[image]](https://forums.tapas.io/uploads/default/original/4X/5/0/7/507e8a27970643abf80afc54e0c25665f32338d9.jpg){kind=link}
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IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
[image]
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
[image]
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
[image]
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
[image]
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then you…
[image]
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then yo…
ARE YOU BORED? THEN READ THIS! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSIN…
LOOK MORTY I TURNED MYSELF INTO A PICKLE!
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HA..HAHA... THAT'S THE FUNNIEST S*IT IVE EVER HEARD!
TURN ME INTO A PICKLE, GRANDPA RICK!
OKAY, HOLD ON A SEC, MORTY!
OH NO, I SHOT YOU WITH THE WRONG LASER! I TURNED YOU INTO...INTO A...
PROMOTION!
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVE…
BOOP! BEEP! BOOP! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
T…
THE PROMOTION TRAIN CONTINUES! I'M WARNING YOU DON'T TRY TO STOP ME BECAUSE I WILL CRY! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive i…
100 SUBS 100 SUBS 100 SUBS! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GI…
Attention Everyone! This is your pilot speaking. If you look out the right side of your window, you'll see the beautiful skyline of Los Angeles! If you look to your right, you'll see OH GOD WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?!
IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND I…
WHAT TIME IS IT? ADVENTURE TIME? NO! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS …
DON'T MAKE ME BEG AND DON'T MAKE ME GROVEL! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like…
RING RING RING! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Th…
WOOF WOOF! WHAT'S THAT LUCY? JIMMY FELL DOWN A WELL? NO, YA DUMMY! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS.…
YOU HEAR THAT? IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then…
DING DONG! IT'S TIME TO PROMOTE MY UPDATED NOVEL IT'S HOT. IT'S BRAND SPANKIN' NEW. AND IT'S FRESH OFF THE PRESSES
If you like a dark fantasy action, tragedy, and watching as the protagonist struggles to survive in a world that WANTS. HER. DEAD and you like GIRLS KISSING GIRLS??
Then yo…