Voodin
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I linked the wrong one! Here.
Here is my first draft of my first page of my first comic, Dislocated, currently no idea what to put for a title card so there's just white space at the top, i want feedback on the dialog though, different font, edit the text, et cetera.
I stayed up all night and I've got it "Dislocated" because it's about an army of skeletons generally not being where they're supposed to be, but I like your recommendations so much, I'm working them into my story @Zannen00 Bleak Marrow gave me an idea for a skeleton hierarchy, In which yellow is …
Glad you took the time to read everyone's responses, ANYWAY, Spongebob has some of the best examples of successful use of smearing here and here. If you want more, one of my favorite cartoon blogs just happens to be Animation Smears.
If you ask me hate mail ain't mail, but I'm a no nonsense type of guy and that mgith not be you. I'd say turn it into a game, pick who you deem worthy to joke with, I'm a redditor so this is the sort of thing you grow numb to quickly.
That's a good one, noted.
Hi I'm Voodin, this name was granted to me in a stroke of accidental genius when my friends have misspelled their previous honorific toward me in the past, it is a complex derivative of my true name. My first project(plot drop inbound) is about an invasion of skeletons in the human world, whom a…
I suggest generally not having a large white shape for the motion lines, do something more akin to an Animation smear(those blurry frames in old school cartoons) or maybe a more manga-styled motion line, it's less likely to obscure your background and brings more focus to the design. The easiest a…
This is a grey area(get it?) Black/White and color both have their place and purpose, In my opinion black and white is for creating bold focal points and focusing on details, color can also be used to achieve this but takes a little more effort. Color can be used to add to the mood of a scene, or ch…