ratscout
Ratscout
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I love spending my free time working on weird little stories. Check them out!
https://tapas.io/ratscout
- Joined
- Apr 19, '18
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- Nov 5, '24
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Sure! Here is mine!
Here is mine! I'll check yours out this weekend!
Your descriptions of our main character’s rage is fantastic! I really liked your narration as well!
I like the adventurous feeling of your story and your characters are interesting so far!
Began reading! Here is mine!
I really liked your descriptions of your character's heart thudding and the breadcrumbs of mystery you left for the reader (also, glad you enjoy my story). 
You had really good descriptions! Good opening chapter!
Read the first Chapter! Enjoyed the setting and the characters. 
Subbed! Really interesting world building in the first chapter!
Subbed and read! Interesting story so far!
Your story is excellent so far! Love it!
I have begun to return the favor. 
Subbed in return! Will comment this weekend!
Hello all! I am here to offer some read-for-reads for your novel. Step right up and I will comment on at least one of your chapters if you do the same for me. I will also sub to your story if you sub to mine. I will get to as many stories as possible, but know that I will eventually have to close th…
Makes sure you read the rules and read and comment on at least one of my chapters first as a show of good faith.
Hello, I would love to do this, but please read the rules, first! You have to read and comment on at least one of my chapters as a show of good faith before I commit to this. Thank you.
@HalfAWriter
Hello! I have returned with your critique, also.
Praise: I feel like this is a pretty easy story to pick up any day of the week as the sentences are short and the dialogue keeps the story flowing. I also enjoy that our main character is a babysitter. Very cute. I feel like the dial…
@Turtur I have finally returned with your critique, LOL Praise: I really enjoyed your concept--you don't see too many stories about a mortician's assistant LOL. I thought your descriptions were very good and you established your main character's personality very well through dialogue which I lov…
Here is mine!
Subbed! Here's mine!
Subbed! Here is mine!
I have subbed! Here is mine!
Subbed! Here is mine!
Sure! Here is mine!
Jan's 14th birthday is about to pass, and according to his mother, it will be followed by a mysterious event that will change his life. Will his Paradise be shattered on e his birthday comes?
Here's mine! Subbed to yours!
Subbed, and will start reading shortly! Here is mine:
I'm game! Subbed to yours!
I will add you to the roster! Make sure you leave a like and comment on mine before I get started on yours!
I will add you to the roster! Make sure you leave a like and comment on my story before I get to yours.