@Heliox14 Subbed! I really enjoyed this one. You use a very jumpy stream of consciousness style that makes the characters voices completely unique and defining of who they really are in their thoughts. That's what caught my eye from the start. By the end I was craving more. Hence the sub. Keep up the great work.
@melindemari The word usage is refreshing and thoughtful. Make sure you combine your ideas into a single simple sentence at times to really hit a point home with the reader - Trust, me I have the same problem. I like how passionate and romantic your stuff is. Keep it up!
@punkarsenic Wow. You are interesting in that you have some eye for design and skills that many artist spend tons of time working to achieve yet never quite make it, yet you have some basics to work on in terms of panel layout or human form but I know you'll get those down perfect with time and effort. The colors and textures are great. It feels like I'm reading an old found scroll of a story told generations ago, which is cool. I think some of your font choices could be made a little more simple as to be easier to take in. Well done! Keep up this style and turn into what you're known for!
@MaggieW I love your line work. It's so crisp and sure of itself. I'd say work on trying to expand what we see with some wider shots to show off the surroundings and atmosphere in which the characters live their lives. Also try putting a good chunk of conversation into one panel instead of spreading it out with responses and reactions in panel after panel. I'm guilty of this too! The character designs feel a little basic - not that simplicity isn't good, but perhaps something that shows the unique personality of each character more while not being something that you commonly see. Awesome work. I'll come back for more.
@VikiKuli You'd better keep drawing and coloring like you are because you're going to become great one day. Ever read the webcomic Wilde Life? Somehow you seem like youre headed towards that. The word balloons seem a bit rushed at times but get the job done. Its cool seeing you grow as I work through pages in the story. I like how well you know your characters and their voices. Really great so far. Will be back to see how you've grown.