A big thank you! (link your work)

[ChristodeBoyet]

Woooahhh! A full blown science fiction with no fantasy elements, you got yourself a sub.

[ChristodeBoyet]

Privates sword arm is mighty only when a back is facing him.

[ChristodeBoyet]

I like that you have so much dialogue in your comic. Gives your characters a real personality. Fair warning though, if I lose interest along the way I'll unsub.

[yondoloki]

Thanks to you too!! Here's my comic ^^

The Changeling's Sister :: Prologue 1 | Tapas

[ChristodeBoyet]

Spranger bears got me because I've done it with a couch. Grocery days made me laugh so hard. All in all, you've got great humor!

[RedMoonDragon]

Here is mine for your consideration.

Universe Jumper | Tapas

[ChristodeBoyet]

For The Simple Things. I think life has day-to-day moments that are great and you put your life to good use in this.

For Whiteboard Reviews I immediately subbed after reading the third episode. Because your reviews are similar to what I think of the games. I figured it would be helpful to look at when I consider buying a game. Can I recommend Front Mission 3? It's a goodie, but old game. This game has two branching storylines and each decision matters. I also ask that you invest your time on the network, which in the game is like the internet. Decrypting sites was so fun for me. I literally had a notebook with 20-30 pages filled with nothing but passwords. Each site you decrypt either adds lore to the game or unlocks more parts for wanzers. It's a tactical rpg, I hope you have fun with it.

[kyupol]

Feel free to read mine... (warning: very long read lol)

MAG-ISA / PARA-SAYO | Tapas

[ChristodeBoyet]

It's all good if it's a long read, so don't worry about it.

[spicy_sweets]

Ah jeez, I think I misunderstood. When you said you read 2 stories, I thought you read cpc all the way up to the current chapter + the short story. Whoops cx

[ChristodeBoyet]

I read one chapter of both and they both have an interesting premise. For CPC it's because I wanted to wait to finish the rest here, so that I could sub to you. Plush Love I also read one, but I just didn't like it enough to continue it on. You really do have an interesting premise for both and definitely deserve more readers.

[ChristodeBoyet]

If you want since I'm doing this thread just drop a link to Plush Love and I'll finish it up. Plus, it helps to get your story out there.

[spicy_sweets]

Ehhhh, you don't have to if you don't want to. Especially if the pov rubbed you the wrong way. But I guess if others are interested:

Plush Love :: L | Tapas

[ChristodeBoyet]

I don't want you to take it that way. To be more clear, just wasn't a fan of the story. I like serious stuff or somewhat realistic and it felt wayyy out there for me, sorry about that.

[R.n.P]

Yh I’m pretty much an amateur n so I’m just wroking to improve my work for now​, I made some changes to my comic for my new episode so I’ll link it to the forum later on to see the feedback on it n see where next i can focus my improvements on

[spicy_sweets]

Ah, no prob! PL is a pretty odd book, so I can understand if it isn't with every reader's tastes. I just didn't want to make you feel like you had to read it if you didn't like it, I guess. Though, this definitely does help my story get out there xD

[ChristodeBoyet]

That's good to know. Another suggestion if you would, but this is something that's down the line. Once you've felt you've improved enough and if you remembered to plot out your story. You could re-package your comic, that way your beginner art doesn't scare readers away. Believe me people can be harsh when it comes to art. Because they usually go by first impressions for comics.

[ChristodeBoyet]

I want to give it another go, I really liked CPC just from the first chapter. I hope that if I read this one over from beginning to end. I could fall in love with it, just the same.

[spicy_sweets]

Ironically enough, I have the urge to rewrite CPC's first chapter because of how cringey it reads to me. The later chapters are so much better imo
Possibly! I'm glad you at least gave it another shot, nonetheless.

[gwizdala]

Thanks for subscribing! I hope you enjoy reading my comics/reviews as much as I enjoy writing them
Your recommendation has been added to the queue. I've never heard of that game before - it sounds really interesting (I love me some good decryption)! If you'd like to see what others have been recommending, check out this forum post here.