The first episode has been rewritten, especially the beginning, which has been totally changed. An illustration has been added to the one already included. You could say, as in the title, this is
A New Beginning to My Story
A big thank you to everyone who chipped in with their inputs. It helped lots.
First Chapter Rewrite or not? Please Help if You Can
I am, however, still open to suggestions that might make it even better. Please do check out my work. I had been on break for a month due to exams but it will be coming back very very soon!
Again, a huge thank you to @crowstories and @lirina.