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I'm new, and mostly new to making my own web-comics. I wanted to take this opportunity to introduce myself, and my work24. I've just started this series, and I'm enjoying it very much. If you have a moment to spare, I'd appreciate a look. Constructive criticism is always appreciated, and I'd be glad to trade my opinions of your work for yours of mine.

Thanks for looking. Stars and Dust24

One more thing: People seem very pleasant here, and I'm glad that I found a spot that's supportive with an ambiance of camaraderie. For that, I'd have to thank each of you, and the staff. It's such a nice change from what I'm used to.

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Nice to meet you! I'll be honest, romance isn't really my thing when it's the focal point of the story, but those are quite popular so I'm sure you'll find some interested readers.
If you want, you can check out mine!

It's called Dreamwalker Felix and is about a grumpy teenage boy who learns he has an uncontrollable ability to enter the dreams of those around him while he sleeps.

Hello and Welcome @digitalvalium1! smile

Glad to see you enjoying creating your series!

I think your heading to a good start! But it's still too early to tell you more! wink

I think in cover is a bit hard to read the title since the text is so thin!

My suggestion would be to put the text more thick in the title, use bold version of the font for example! The text being a little bit bigger would look good too!

The black line in the title could be a little bit more thick (or instead of a line try using a small drop shadow for example).

You can try the font being black and the line being a white! The author name I'll make it a bit thicker too.

Is really helpful to use as reference other comic books/manga to help you get a better result in you cover.

Examples of types of titles:

Keep Up And Good luck with you comic :D!

And Have fun!!


NuwComics
https://tapastic.com/series/NuwComics

Looks good! I'm curious to see where this story's going, and I like your art style a lot, so I subscribed smile My feed back is this: try to vary your line-weight. When you're inking your comic, whether digitally or on paper, the idea is to make the thickness of the outlines vary because it gives the eye more to look at, and adds weight to the image. For example, making the outline of someone's legs thicker than the outline of their arms adds the feeling of gravity by making the legs seem heavier. You can also thin the line or even break off the line in places to give the feeling of highlights (I think the technical term for this is a "breathing line"). Plus it's fun to play around with smile

Thank you very much for the advice. Is there something you'd like me to look at? I'd be more than happy to.

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, and the sub! I very much appreciate it. I'm afraid to say I'm still trying to just get my lines straight! That's very good advice though. I'll try it.

In general I liked yours. It's efficient, and effective in conveying a tone. I know hardly anything about strips, so please take this with a grain of salt. Varying your panel layout may offer a way to improve visual interest, but I think too much change would ruin the charm your work already has. It is really quite charming as it is.

I enjoy french pop stars. And your designs are cute.
Easy to read thus far. Nice work.

Welcome. I haven't been here long either...but this is my latest. Drastically different. Than yours lol

French, of course! Wait until I start actually having dialogue with cross language puns! It'll be fun.

I looked at Monomania, and liked it very much. Very dark, with good camera angles that dramatize the action. Very good work. You might try inserting some of those dramatic angles into your panel design. With judicious use of negative space and dramatic angles, it would really set off the dynamic camera angles, I think.

Thank you, that's very kind of you. I appreciate your comments.

I looked at yours and I have to say, the story is compelling. Straight to the action. Good dialogue. That's good writing.

Your artwork has potential, and I'd like to see you follow through. I'd love to see what you're truly capable of. I have high hopes for you.

This has turned out to be excellent advice. I wanted to take the opportunity to thank you again. Please, if there's something you need, ask.

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Oh my goodness, I'm so sorry, I only just now saw that you wrote this message! I'm fairly new to Tapastic and forgot to check for forum notifications! Gah..... so, so sorry! Anyways, I'm really glad my advice helped you out! That's wonderful to hear! smiley