Any advice to fix this plot structure and make it flow together better? It's not finished, but this will be the general plot

[Nugtown]

To be fair I don't think he's a troll at all. An overabundance of questions seems normal for people who aren't neurotypical though.

[JoshRaed]

I don't understand what I'm supposed to do here that I don't already. I could write a 30 page book report on my own plot explaining all the characters and how their stories work and why. What do I not seem to comprehend and what are the words of a person who does understand this stuff? Like what would I do if I understood this that I'm not currently doing.