@ivanskilling @Aeneas1 @TheLemmaLlama @MarvinDziamski @fsarbolaez @Christy_Oshima @thecrystalrook @kyupol @Nossumy @J.K.Borealis I'll be getting back to each and every one of you as soon I can go on your stories with my reviews. There's also something fun I have in mind where I'm going to choose one of your stories as an example of what my in-depth reviews are going to look like and how much harsher I am with those types of reviews. I'm not sure when I'm going to do it or which one I'll choose but it's something you all can look forward to. My focus for those will be based on the pacing, characterization, structure, critiques, suggestions, world-building, compliments, plot, visuals, and themes. Now, for these types of videos, I maybe sit and talk about your story for 10-15 minutes tops but it'll be fun for me and also enlightening for you guys. Again I cannot stress enough that I want you guys to know that I'm looking at these more from an objective lens with the in-depth while normal reviews are more subjective. I hope all of you guys are able to take something from my feedback when I get to your stories and continue improving onwards.
Hey i am defs interested! i got two novels out, you can choose anyone of the two.
https://tapas.io/series/TWILIGHT-MEMORIES1
https://tapas.io/series/SO-MY-DAD-HIRED-A-BABYSITTER
Thanks for the opportunity!
@jadenlegend6 I chose your story to be the one I use my in-depth review for. Here it is and it feels like I'm saying anything repetitive I do apologize it's just I tried to go as depth as possible with just a single chapter of info. And in regards to everyone else. If you have any thoughts on it feel free to share those as well.
It's not going to be a perfect review by any means but I do hope you all can take something from it.
My biggest problem seems to be time. These types of reviews can take from 2-5 days unlike the other reviews so I apologize if I don't to everyone's story just yet. Google Slides is my go-to for presentations like in-depth reviews but don't be surprised if I eventually switch to something else to use.
Hey cloud geeky. i don't konw what to say. i was not expecting an in depth review. I learned a lot from this review. while i was watching i kept thinking about the changes i should make and i even thought up of a couple of new ideas.
Honestly you deserve more recognition you did a splendid job not just on mine on a couple of your other reviews i watched.
Thank you so much for this i really appreciate it.
@jadenlegend6 no problem! I'm glad you were able to take something from the review. The difference between the two is going to be one is going to be more like a presentation and the other is more so just my thoughts like a regular review. If you have any questions or thoughts or want me to clarify anything feel free to ask them anytime.
@J.K.Borealis here is your review! Hope you enjoy it!
@J.K.Borealis on second, it does make sense why he would pull out his weapon against the main characters. They look kind of shady but then again... So does he? You got me asking a lot of questions so good job!
@Nossumy hope you enjoy it!
You nailed it all!
A really thorough analysis. This comic is full of subtle unspoken nuances and you're on the right track to find them all. I tried to make this without even the slightest narration and I also am not a fan of "exposition speech", but that's why every action and spoken line of the characters, as well as the details in the environment, speak volumes. Having it read by someone like you who understands it is a joy ^^ Thank you for the review, I appreciate it!
@J.K.Borealis and @Nossumy I'm glad you both were able to enjoy my reviews!
My main comic isn’t finished yet but could you review my spin off series Jack and Pujita?
The main story where they are from is from Cracking Eggs. I don’t know if you review individual episodes or full stories. But here’s the first episode if you’re curious.
Thank you for this opportunity for a review! It helps me and my writing!
Hii, I’m Vlaut, as a fellow YouTube and tapas creator this sounds really cool!
Here’s the links to my comics, I would feel honoured to get a review from you ^^
White Tiger, a mystery comic made from photos turned into comic-style panels: https://tapas.io/series/White-Tiger2
U’known World, a comedy-action-fantasy comic, traditionally drawn: https://tapas.io/series/Uknown-World
Thank you for such an opportunity
I'm glad to see you again on this forum! So about a review I have been working on 3-4 series and out of all those series I have a main one that I focus more, this series has full on planned ending and a lore behind the world and I'm only at the start of it but I would like to review the first chapter of it if possible, the novel is called Teras: the deadly game of cards
the link: https://tapas.io/series/Teras-the-deadly-game-of-cards/info