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Dec 2022

Hii, I’m Vlaut, as a fellow YouTube and tapas creator this sounds really cool!
Here’s the links to my comics, I would feel honoured to get a review from you ^^

White Tiger, a mystery comic made from photos turned into comic-style panels: https://tapas.io/series/White-Tiger2

U’known World, a comedy-action-fantasy comic, traditionally drawn: https://tapas.io/series/Uknown-World

Thank you for such an opportunity :smile:

I'm glad to see you again on this forum! So about a review I have been working on 3-4 series and out of all those series I have a main one that I focus more, this series has full on planned ending and a lore behind the world and I'm only at the start of it but I would like to review the first chapter of it if possible, the novel is called Teras: the deadly game of cards

the link: https://tapas.io/series/Teras-the-deadly-game-of-cards/info

Thanks! I really liked the review and left you a like and comment. Do you mind if I share this around on other sites?

Sure! Do as you like! And thank you for answering my questions on the video!

Thanks a bunch for the review! :flushed::sparkling_heart: It's really nice to see someone else's perspective on my work, cuz a lot of the time, it's just me and my thoughts on a doc :laughing:
To answer your question... I really did want to make her escape this situation because of course she should, but like I said at first, the first two chapters are sort of one chapter broken into two because of the character limit. And her choosing not to leave is also part of the way I wanted to make the characters slowly revealing their personalities... and issues over time(like the reader gets to know the characters just as it takes time to get to know someone in real life).

Not to get into spoilers, but she definitely does have a reason not to leave the park, even though she definitely should lol.
I hope I somewhat got you curious to read further. Hope you enjoyed the stay. And if you continue reading, I hope you keep enjoying how the lives of the characters begin to unravel.

I really appreciate your review! I know it's a fantasy romance but I love mixing in elements of horror and action

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