Thanks a bunch for the review! It's really nice to see someone else's perspective on my work, cuz a lot of the time, it's just me and my thoughts on a doc
To answer your question... I really did want to make her escape this situation because of course she should, but like I said at first, the first two chapters are sort of one chapter broken into two because of the character limit. And her choosing not to leave is also part of the way I wanted to make the characters slowly revealing their personalities... and issues over time(like the reader gets to know the characters just as it takes time to get to know someone in real life).
Not to get into spoilers, but she definitely does have a reason not to leave the park, even though she definitely should lol.
I hope I somewhat got you curious to read further. Hope you enjoyed the stay. And if you continue reading, I hope you keep enjoying how the lives of the characters begin to unravel.